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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Struggling on, he keeps moving, With each step, his life proving, Get away, from there to home, Place of death, he’s removing Battered self, he comes alone, Falls at feet, with painful groan, Once many, now he’s the first, Returns cut, with broken bone, But alive, most were much worse, Song of dead, in the last verse, Silent tune, for none moving, Death follows, the warring curse. Gloom 2000 |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! Excellent poem!  You certainly put imagery to mind. |
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Broken_Heart Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57Netherlands |
Great poem, I felt really dark reading it... Makes me think of life on the dark side again! Keep up the good work! |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you both, taramw & Broken_Heart, The dark side images sear my brain, drive me from happiness so nothing will remain. your words, your response makes my words and scattering of words worthwhile. Gloom |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
PG..good stuff here son. It made be look behind the words to see the true meaning. Hardrock |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Well, thanks Hardrock old man, I guess the point of this is to make others to think, and see another perspective in their thoughts. It seems I was successful. Thank you for taking the time to respond. Gloom |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
well as he struggles and keeps on moving doesn't he improve his life at all? me just questioning... ~~M |
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