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Dark Poetry #2

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Click
Member

since 2000-06-11

Posts 202
USA

0 posted 2000-07-24 06:03 PM

        Drawn by you,
         like a moth
        to the flame.

        Singed my wings,
       but I stil remain.

        Eratic flight,
        almost through.

        I won't stop,
    until consumed by you.

Click

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

1 posted 2000-07-25 05:10 AM

Hey, wow. This is really good. Drawn to what you know will hurt ...

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

2 posted 2000-07-25 05:33 AM

Great use of words!

Imagined it exactly... fabulous poem

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

3 posted 2000-07-25 05:57 AM

brief, but good,
compact emotionalization.

Gloom

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

4 posted 2000-07-25 08:12 PM

I agree with all the above, Click. Nice work. Hardrock

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2000-07-25 08:43 PM

I LOVE this, Click. Really really good. Spoke to me directly. Perfect use of few words. Awesome..
Catalinamoon

tookabear
Junior Member

since 2000-07-24

Posts 28
Mansfield, TX USA

6 posted 2000-07-25 08:47 PM

This poem really touched me... I have been in several abusive relationships, somehow drawn to guys I knew would only hurt me, seeming to fall even harder. I really love this poem.. thank you for allowing me to read it.

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