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Koi Kokoro ( Awakening of Love)
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Koi Kokoro ( Awakening of Love) |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Your eyes Capture my heart And shame the sky in their blueness Your skin Fuses with mine Nerves I never had awaken How can I not love you? All you are is all of me We speak with the same mouth Cry with the same eyes Even though your face never betrays your heart koi kokoro Your hands Catch me at the edge of passion I've never been so helpless before Your voice Realizes a beauty As I have never experianced How can I not love you? I will always yeild To the moistness of your tounge To the tenderness of your lips Even though you're tearing apart my will-power koi kokoro How can I not love you? All you are is all of me We speak with the same mouth Cry with the same eyes Even though your face never betrays your heart koi kokoro Your scent Lingers on my skin Even after you're gone ****************************************************Note- I had some help with the tital from a friend....As I said, I don't know Japanese too well. Koi means "intense love" or...*giggle* it also means "carp". Kokoro means "awakening" as far as I know.  -Wren |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Your scent lingers on my skin...such beautiful words, and a beautiful poem!! Loved this, wonderful imagery also. The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wren, this is so beautiful. Can feel the situation unfolding, the love, the desire. Very powerful. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wren,...aaahhh, *soft sigh* to the last part...."Your scent Lingers on my skin Even after you're gone". Wonderful work,...also like to say that I so enjoy the little splashes of Japanese that you so skillfully toss into your poems. I once wrote my whole reply to you in Japanese but I erased it and rewrote it in English. Oh well. Take care W. *Peace. |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
beautiful poem!! i loved when you said "your eyes capture my heart" your work is very good and it is something i can relate to!! i'll look forward to reading your other poems too!! |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Ditto to the above: i feel like a fool not having anything original to add, but they already said it! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Wren, so many hearts you are wooing with this poem. A beautiful piece "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
Wren, I think this may be the best thing you have ever written. "All you are is all of me We speak with the same mouth Cry with the same eyes" It speaks of such a lovely forbidden-feeling devotion. Wonderful. "And one day...the whole stinking world would be theirs..." -- Velvet Goldmine (Todd Haynes, Oscar Wilde and, unofficially, David Bowie) |
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