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And Life Goes On...
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And Life Goes On... |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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And Life Goes On... All's quiet, forever now In my deafness, I see what I couldn't hear, I hear what I couldn't feel, I feel what I couldn't sense, and I sense what I couldn't touch, before... and life goes on... I am your dark, the night closing in suffocating, releasing my spirits to soar over you, capturing what might have been if only... I am your light, awakening in you the want, the need to fill, drink in and delight in my sweetness, that can reign upon and seep into your skin. I am your memory, forever clinging to you, unable to remove my shedding, every fiber of me embedded. I am a part of you forever... and life goes on... M/M 4*2*2k |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This one grabbed me right from the beginning and held me tight to the end. Nice work! Be well M. *Peace. |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
MMoonchild, Nicely put... I like the emotional build thoughout this one.. Good Job, I look forward to more..more..more LarBear |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
Loved this one...such emotion and feeling. Thank God that life does go on! Linda |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Spitfire...thank you..that's how I felt when it rained out of me LarBear...such a nice response thank you for wanting "more" ~~softly Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Linda..yes I guess it's good that life does go on...even when sometimes you wish it wouldn't ~~softly Maureen |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
i love every one of your poems that i've read!! this just adds to the list!! feel free to look and mine and don't forget to comment on it!! i'd be so happy if a great poet like yourself said something about my pems even if it wasn't good!! thank you for inspiring me! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thebeautybrat...I need to {{hug }} you for that...it's one of the sweetest things ever said to me...in type that is and you don't know how much that means to me..yes I will check your poems this morning..and no one writes badly if they are writing from their heart...just takes practice and patience to make your thoughts felt. ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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