Dark Poetry #2 |
The Tolling Bell |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Hear it toll, The clear tone that is ringing, Hear it chime Marking time, It’s a sad song of singing, Hear it toll. Twelve tones clear, The date changes once again, Dark passage Marks an age, Tolling against all the pain, And all hear. Joyless, Joyless, hear the bell. Gloom |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh how very dark and somber! Great writing. *Welcome here!!!* Be well PG. *Peace. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
First of all, welcome, and second, I have to compliment you on your name, too perfect! The poem, I like very much. Tolling bell, ticking clocks, life passing by, I have always felt the significance.. Catalinamoon |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Hear, hear!! Well done, Prof. Nice imagery. Hardrock |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Hey there Gloomy one..I see they already have your number I won't smile for you, at least not right away.. Once in a ...Blue Moon Me |
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