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It'll Never Be The Same
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It'll Never Be The Same |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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It'll never be the same, I realise and admit it now, Cos somewhere along the way, It all changed somehow. Can't get it back, shouldn't even try, I have to admit the truth, Another friendship is about to die, I hang my head, hide my face and cry. We were a team, that others envied, You were the moon, I was the sea, You pulled me in and gazed on down at me. But life's pettiness got in the way, No more you shared with me, I should start a collection, An ongoing talisman of all those who hurt me. I expected too much, Yet to me it wasn't so, Now there is so much less, Still I don't want to let go. For whatever reason I will never know, Why things had to change, But please know a little piece of me has died, And I need to know why I can't let go? You were the best thing that's happened to me in years, You were my light in the darkness, But now my world is dark and dreary again, I cry hurt, confused and bitter tears. I gave you my best, Obviously it wasn't good enough, You've shown me my place again, Trampled in life's dust......... I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, Hope this is not true to life. No one should feel like they are insignificant like that. It is awful. Hope that you are feeling better and things look up soon. Nice writing....really felt the emotion. Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Lone Wolf, it could be if I allowed myself to be swayed not by words but by actions!! But I value my self worth and will weather the storm. Thanks  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is a really good expression of the desperation someone feels when yet another relationship has failed and they blame themselves for that. I've felt that way before, and it's yuck! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Isis I lost a wonderful internet friend..she was my sweet angel of the North Country...and I miss her but I would never want anyone to have to be my friend...others will come along and be my friend and take the time to visit me and my life. But hell yes it hurts to lose friends that we believe care for us. Take care and be strong hon. James |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Such a painful piece. How when something is over that we do not want to end It makes us feel..ya know..to blame.{{hugs}} -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, how can something be over when it has no end? How can you wonder what can be just around the bend? There are forces at work that you cannot see But they do not tear apart the friends that we be I have never left you my kindred, I've always been here And it saddens me to know that on your face is a tear I know that I am the reason that you feel this way But know that I do think about you each and every day You are my friend and kindred and as such we'll always be I here for you. . . and you here for me. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~  ~~HUG~HUG~HUG~HUG~HUG~HUG~HUG~ |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
It takes courage to admit "it" is "done". You made me feel it. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Firstly welcome Click to passions and the dark forums. Glad to have you here. Lotharingia, for whatever reason one feels this way it hurts, like your good and best aren't good enough.. we can only try can't we? james, thanks for your kind words hon, miss you round here. Sven, I wrote this before I even spoke to you, can't you feel it? It's less, it's different... it cannot go back can it? My whole life is so DOOLS it's not funny!! Thanks KitKat, I try not to blame anyone in life, I blame destiny, fate, distance, differences etc.. To blame is as good as to hate, I never hate. I perhaps should be stronger to feel that, but I believe in karma.. Thanks Spitfire my fellow countrywoman!! And Click, thank you too, and I'm honoured mine was the first post you read!!  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
isis, isis... you've shown me my place again....... man oh man, here go the tears again!! this is sooooooooo good!! sniff sniff!! kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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