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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Luminescent white orbs glowing shining on black water flowing taking time to reach the sea slowing moving outwardly. Green shadows on the water’s edge nature’s moving night time hedge moon glow bright as days first light Mur is lovely in its night. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
First of all Happy 7000th post darlin! Then, wow at the poem! I like this muchly! I hope very much so that this makes the book (don't submit too many or we'll have a book of just yer poems *wink* *wink*) *hugs* ~Heather |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Could this "be" any more perfect??? Me thinks not! I absolutely love the flow in this Poet deVine ... wonderful! click  And WOW ... Congratulations on 7000!!!!!!!!!!! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Huge congrats on your 7000 posts, Poet deVine and a brilliant luminously divine poem you have posted here.... regards, sudhir |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
me too...and congrats--7000...wow... |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Ad my congrats on 7000, wow. Also, a beautiful image you have painted here. Pete |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ This little poem is simply lovely. Good choice. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Sharon! Denise |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
That was some seriously tasty imagery. I can just image the light of three moons (or two moons and a planet?) being kicked around and warped in the level of the water. This BETTER be in the book! Mike |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
HOW MANY POSTS?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!? Well done you Beautiful poem too.... soothing, wonderful imagery and a bit more soothing thrown in for good measure. The way all the words just flow gently into each other only serves to heighten the tranquility. Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Poet, You put me in the black and silver ocean. Lovely, lovely, lovely. |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
PdV - This is so lovely, such beautiful imagery. Bonnie |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Mysterious and beautiful! Corinne |
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FlyHigh Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 84Bekkestua, Norway |
Ooooh, nice... And grats.. "Luck affects everything. Let your hook always be cast; in the stream where you least expect it there will be a fish." Ovid (BC 43-18 AD, Roman Poe |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I remember this one, and love it more now!  |
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gothicmoth Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 89 |
Excellent imagery. Thanks for the wonderful trip! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The book without this poem would be MURly inconceivable! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Sharon, a wonderful piece and the imagery fantastic. My grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
See Sharon! What'd I tell you? |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Wow! What a wonderful poem! This one gets my vote! "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love this one. . . The theme is wonderful. . . so. . . tell me more about Mur. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Beautiful and Enchanting The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW WOW WOW and congrats on post 7000!!! more wow's why with that many posts someone might make you a moderator  jm |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Absolutely breathtaking Ms. deVine. I loved this the first time I read it and I love it now...it definitely deserves to be in the book! *Krista Knutson* "Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~ "We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
PDV Congrads on your 7000th post. a really beautifully poem, truely magical. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Enchanting in every way...the perfect poem! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Poet deVine, Wonderful freind, you move my heart with this one thank you so much. Love, Ceremity |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Poet deVine, im glad i did a little surfing and came across this gem! so much meaning within so few lines |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
So, would I get into trouble if I voted twice do you think? Corinne |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
You know Sharon, you should reply to all these nice people who praise you!  |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Lovely image-- i really hope to read this one in print. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I do want to thank you all for reading and replying to this poem. I wasn't ignoring you, just didn't want to bump it up myself! I'm shy you know! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
enjoyed this little read.. nicely written!dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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