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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2000-06-20 04:00 PM


Luminescent white orbs glowing
shining on black water flowing
taking time to reach the sea
slowing moving outwardly.

Green shadows on the water’s edge
nature’s moving night time hedge
moon glow bright as days first light
Mur is lovely in its night.



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X Angel
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1 posted 2000-06-20 04:05 PM


First of all Happy 7000th post darlin!
Then, wow at the poem! I like this muchly!
I hope very much so that this makes the book (don't submit too many or we'll have a book of just yer poems *wink* *wink*)
*hugs*
~Heather

Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2000-06-20 04:42 PM


Could this "be" any more perfect??? Me thinks not!  I absolutely love the flow in this Poet deVine ... wonderful! click  

And WOW ... Congratulations on 7000!!!!!!!!!!!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2000-06-20 04:44 PM


Huge congrats on your 7000 posts, Poet deVine and a brilliant luminously divine poem you have posted here....

regards, sudhir

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2000-06-20 05:23 PM


me too...and congrats--7000...wow...
Not A Poet
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5 posted 2000-06-20 05:30 PM


Ad my congrats on 7000, wow. Also, a beautiful image you have painted here.

Pete

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2000-06-20 07:15 PM


PoetdeVine~
This little poem is simply lovely.
Good choice.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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7 posted 2000-06-20 11:07 PM


Very beautiful, Sharon!  

Denise

bsquirrel
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8 posted 2000-06-21 02:47 AM


That was some seriously tasty imagery. I can just image the light of three moons (or two moons and a planet?) being kicked around and warped in the level of the water. This BETTER be in the book!

Mike

Colin
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9 posted 2000-06-21 08:44 AM


HOW MANY POSTS?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!? Well done you  

Beautiful poem too.... soothing, wonderful imagery and a bit more soothing thrown in for good measure. The way all the words just flow gently into each other only serves to heighten the tranquility.

Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.

linda munday
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10 posted 2000-06-21 10:07 AM


Poet,
You put me in the black and silver ocean.
Lovely, lovely, lovely.

BSC
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11 posted 2000-06-21 10:10 AM


PdV - This is so lovely, such beautiful imagery.  Bonnie
Corinne
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state of confusion
12 posted 2000-06-21 10:22 AM


Mysterious and beautiful!


Corinne

FlyHigh
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13 posted 2000-06-21 11:47 AM


Ooooh, nice...  And grats..  

"Luck affects everything. Let your hook always be cast; in the stream where you least expect it there will be a fish."

Ovid (BC 43-18 AD, Roman Poe

Nicole
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14 posted 2000-06-21 12:54 PM


I remember this one, and love it more now!

gothicmoth
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15 posted 2000-06-21 01:49 PM


Excellent imagery. Thanks for the wonderful trip!
Balladeer
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16 posted 2000-06-21 02:02 PM


The book without this poem would be MURly inconceivable!
Dark Angel
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17 posted 2000-06-21 05:25 PM


Oh Sharon, a wonderful piece and the imagery fantastic.

My grief lies onward and my joy behind
(Shakespeare)

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
18 posted 2000-06-21 05:41 PM


See Sharon! What'd I tell you?
Dawn Eclipse
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The Horsehead Nebula
19 posted 2000-06-21 06:38 PM


Wow!  What a wonderful poem!  This one gets my vote!  

"Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*

Sven
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20 posted 2000-06-21 07:18 PM


I love this one. . .

The theme is wonderful. . . so. . . tell me more about Mur. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



HelmutB
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21 posted 2000-06-21 07:56 PM


Beautiful and Enchanting

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Janet Marie
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22 posted 2000-06-21 10:20 PM


WOW WOW WOW

and congrats on post 7000!!!
more wow's
why with that many posts someone might make you a moderator  
jm

Alwye
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In the space between moments
23 posted 2000-06-22 12:02 PM


Absolutely breathtaking Ms. deVine.  I loved this the first time I read it and I love it now...it definitely deserves to be in the book!  

*Krista Knutson*

"Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~


"We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~

brian madden
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24 posted 2000-06-23 03:38 PM


PDV Congrads on your 7000th post. a really beautifully poem, truely magical.
Martie
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25 posted 2000-06-23 06:10 PM


Enchanting in every way...the perfect poem!
Cerenity
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26 posted 2000-06-29 04:43 PM


Hi Poet deVine,

Wonderful freind, you move my heart with this one thank you so much.

Love, Ceremity

kaile
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27 posted 2000-07-02 11:10 PM


Poet deVine, im glad i did a little surfing and came across this gem! so much meaning within so few lines
Corinne
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state of confusion
28 posted 2000-07-03 11:35 AM


So, would I get into trouble if I voted twice do you think?

Corinne

Christopher
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29 posted 2000-08-03 10:52 AM


You know Sharon, you should reply to all these nice people who praise you!  
Jamie
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Blue Heaven
30 posted 2000-08-04 11:40 AM


Lovely image-- i really hope to read this one in print.



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
31 posted 2000-08-04 07:47 PM


I do want to thank you all for reading and replying to this poem. I wasn't ignoring you, just didn't want to bump it up myself! I'm shy you know!    
dgvarner
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32 posted 2000-08-05 04:39 PM


enjoyed this little read..    nicely written!

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


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