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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2000-07-16 12:18 PM



such beauty
is the provenance of pain...
as i looked
i beheld a softness;
velvet for my fingertips.
in the morn
i saw a dewdrop
resting peacefully
on your face.
i reached for you
to hold you close
that i might fully
enjoy your beauty--
such beauty
is the provenance of pain;
thorn-bit...

dgvarner



"i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-07-16 11:07 AM


This is lovely!  
Marsha
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since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
2 posted 2000-07-17 07:14 PM


Your work is always good this is magnificent.
Loved it, it has my vote.  

AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
3 posted 2000-07-18 12:20 PM


very well written...
you use the words well to go with it...
I liked it ...


If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


Corazon
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209

4 posted 2000-07-18 11:25 AM


wishing I could vote more than once for this  
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
5 posted 2000-07-31 02:33 AM


PoetdV: thanks! glad you stopped to read it

marsha: as always, thank you for your support!!  and thanks for the vote  

avanti: i'm so glad you liked it  

corazon: vote more than once??  gee, thanks!   thanks for THE vote     

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
6 posted 2000-08-03 12:06 PM



dg-
  ok, so how did i miss this one too?
  sorry.  oh well, you definitely have
  my vote with this one.  
  you know this one has always been
  one of my favorite.

  love ya much,
           tricks  

"I have read your words, and within them
I have found your heart.
                   -vlraynes



dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
7 posted 2000-08-04 06:06 PM


thanks tricks..i thought you might want to know one of your favorites was in here..glad you found it  

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


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