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The Wedding Vow – Yesterday, Today and Tomorrow |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada 
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The Wedding Vow – Yesterday, Today and Tomorrow Cherished are the memories that Brought us to this day, For yesterday, was just a “dream” ... A “wish” to contemplate. A fantasy where in my mind, A fleeting glimpse I’d see ... A vision of the true desires I longed for endlessly. And when I dreamed, I did not know The love I’d feel today; The height of my true feelings, And the depths they would portray. And if I had one wish today, A simple wish t’would be ... Is that the love we feel this moment, Lasts eternally. Reality has merged now As you stand here by my side; And as I join your hand in mine, My heart does fill with pride. For as I pledge my love to you, I see in many ways, Reflections of my love for you Are mirrored in your gaze. And by our presence here today, And for the love we share, I thank you for our yesterdays That brought us to be here. But more than this, I vow to you, My wishes yet to come ... Tomorrow’s dreams and fantasies, This day that we are one. Tomorrow’s an adventure That we’ll share together now; Our future’s intertwined forever, Through this holy vow. I promise to remember In the future years and days, The love I feel for you this moment ... Dreams fulfilled today. For in the coming years as we Move on, and reminisce, Back to the day I stood with you And promised with a kiss ... That blessed are the days that I have looked into your eyes, And felt the warmth and love reflect, The essence of our lives. ***** “Yesterday” we dreamed of what might be; “Today” we validate our love; And “tomorrow” we will cherish the life we have shared as one. /Kit McCallum |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Exceptional poetry this from you Kit, and yes.... Many CONGRATULATIONS on posting 1000 posts.... regards, sudhir. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
oooh now this I like!!  very romantic and touching...~Heather |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kit~ this is wonderful!! So romantic.....this shouldn't just be in the book, it should be a greeting card or framed on a wall. It's beautiful! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Kit - Such a beautifully romantic poem. Captures so well the feelings in the heart. Bonnie |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Congrats to you on your 1000 and this is a great piece. Jon |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is absolutely beautiful....who would not be touched by such a piece!! Wow!! I love this!! Bridgette "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Sudhir: Thank you for the wonderful comments Sudhir, and for the 1000 posts! It was my first post to the forums, so I thought it appropriate! ~Heather: Thanks for the lovely comments Heather! ~SEA: Thank you soooooo much SEA ... what a wonderful comment! Much appreciated! ~Bonnie: I was asked to write and recite this Bonnie ... hopefully, it met it's mark! Thanks! ~Jon: Thanks so much Jon, and thanks for the 1000! ~Bridgette: Thank you Bridgette! I have to recite this at an upcoming wedding... glad I'm not shy of public speaking! With MUCH appreciation to all, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 06-20-2000).] |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Congratulations on the 1000 post mark and on this lovely poem too. Best wishes for many happy tomorrows with many more poems. Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Eric: Thanks so much ... and looking forward to many more from you too! Much appreciation, /Kit |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This poem is so beautiful, I love it, and hope it makes it to the book. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ This is absolutely so beautiful. I could have sworn I responded to it ... I have now ! ! ! So very pretty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Lost Dreamer: Thank you sooooo much Lost Dreamer ... I really appreciate it! ~Marge: Thank you so much for responding Marge ... your thoughts and comments mean so much to me, I am so very grateful. With much appreciation, /Kit |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Kit, I couldn't read this without smiling and feeling warm. Hence, my vote. Mike |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Oh, Kit, this is splendid and so beautifully done. Book material for sure. Ellie |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
What a wonderful wedding and anniversary poem. To be read over and over Liz |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
very sweetly expressed, all the words you just can't find at the time that you need them here in this poem....Great work...  Julie :) |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
beautifully written. A wonderful poem. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kit--heart felt words to treasure love...so beautifully done! |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very touching and romantic... lovely If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Mike: Thank you for the sweet response Mike! ~Ellie: Many, many thanks Ellie ... much appreciated! ~Elizabeth: Thank you Elizabeth, that was lovely! ~JulieAnn: Thanks JulieAnn ... nice to have them on paper for times we "forget" ~Mike: Thanks so much Mike! ~Martie: Thank you very much Martie, much appreciated! ~Avanti: I'm glad you enjoyed Avanti ... thank you! Much appreciation to all, /Kit |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Love shines through. A good read. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Yes, yes, yes you have my vote for a beautiful poem, worthy of reading at any wedding, or being part of the vows even!! Beautiful work I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Don't know how i missed this one before but I'm votin' fer it now |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I'm on a hunt for those poems I've missed.. voting here!! Lovely! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so lovely, Kit! Denise |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is an ideal wedding poem, Kit, filled with love, hope, pledge, and optimism. I'm sure they will love it |
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Saint New Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 3 |
I want a copy of the book when it comes out. My E-mail address is manicrock@hotmail.com |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Beautiful theme ... flows very nicely when spoken aloud enjoyed it very much ... you're an excellent writer |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Beautiful Kit This is so special...well written Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Prometheus: Thanks Prometheus ... shining here! ~Isis: I wrote this for an upcoming wedding ... hafta stand up and read in front of about 300 people ... yipes! Thanks Isis! ~Jeffrey: Thanks so much Jeffrey ... much appreciated! ~Poet deVine: Thanks Sharon! ~Denise: Thank you Denise, much appreciated! ~Balladeer: I hope so Balladeer ... don't wanna fall flat on my face in front of many people! Keeping fingers crossed ... thank you! ~Saint: We'll let you know when it's ready Saint ... and thanks! ~Rex: What a beautiful comment Rex ... I so appreciate it! ~Tracie: Thank you so much Tracie ... I'm glad you enjoyed! Much appreciation to all, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful, beautiful, romantic flowing poem full of love and tenderness......Vote entered |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
VERY VERY Nice.........It touched me so by all the love in it. That was a very beautiful piece...... LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kit..this is very beautiful...last summer I attended a cousins wedding and wrote one for them after the day as a present and reminder for them...Maureen We Walked The Path ~~ One field of green one tall of rye the sweetened air the bluest sky we walked the path and crossed a stream beyond the trees passed hidden dreams ~~ and came upon a wonderous sight a tented scene of futures bright of loving thoughts towards memories, new inviting all, to join in too ~~ words of 'cherish,' 'love abide' 'enduring all' the sounds of ~~sighs birds were singing softly now the two that loved professed their vow ~~ to honor, love, forever BE not two but one ... he kissed her... he and then message heard to all, were there came drifting towards us as enlightened air ~~ keeping faith, can help move mountains having hope, keeps spirits bright but having love and sharing all come each morn, throughout the night ~~ three of which we understand of faith and hope from up above words today we took part in the greatest of these three... is love. ~~ M 6.19.99 |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I think this one should be where all can be reminded. Once in a while I should look at it just to remind myself..... *sigh* |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Kit, so simply beautiful. I couldn't vote fast enough. Best wishes, Juls |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Kit, I really think this is one of your best. It's too bad so many people don't take weddings and marriages seriously anymore. I'm glad to see that not everyone feels that way. Great work here. Elizabeth Why ME??? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A beautiful wedding poem to cherish for a lifetime This is soooo beautiful Liz |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
what a beauty!!! simply charming If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
what a beauty!!! simply charming If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Am i late for the reception LOL well not too late to vote for this beautiful dedication.. wonderful Kit!!!!! |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
I love this Kit! Simply beautiful! ~Kelly  You can give without loving but you cannot love without giving There is no danger of developing eye-strain from looking on the bright side of things |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
a wonderful gift for the bride and groom, kit! very sweetly written i wrote one for my cousin and his wife when they got married ("the dream which bids me sleep"..posted in voices!)..people really appreciate a piece of your heart dont they  dg< !signature--> "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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