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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
My favorite spot is Grand Traverse Bay Holds true on any given day Old Mission Peninsula splits east and west Reaching out towards the lake never to rest In the summer the view is breath taking There will be no mistaking On the water the sun gleams Illuminating the beauty with it's beams Waves gently caressing the sand In awe of nature's symphony I stand Inhaling the pure fresh air A hint of pine lingers there Ducks swim and play on the beach Well within my hand's reach Looking out I see lush green trees Almost as far as my eye sees I am moved by the grandeur of this sight Takes my soul to a new height Sitting here my heart is at peace God has granted me sweet release Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LW~ sounds like a wonderful place! Very pretty poem.  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Awesome poem. You do not only have a dark side i see. LOL Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SEA . . . It's beautiful!! Wish I could be there all the time!! Xeonox . . . Thank you, no, I am not all dark sided . . . LOL. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Love the travel among these scenes. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh how beautifully your pen has painted this scene.... Bonnie |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful word pictures here Lone Wolf. The scenes are crafted wonderfully from the heart. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
(click) regards, sudhir |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you Marge, Bonnie, ethome and sudhir. I appreciate your replies....LOL @ Sudhir!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
playing catch up in here today.... glad i didnt miss a chance to vote for this little beauty by you!!! perfect imagery LW... wonderful story telling.. felt like i was there  love that last verses sweetness take care jm |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
wonderful images Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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