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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2000-06-19 08:51 PM

"Teardrop Of A Rose"
Thy embrace is warm with thy love,
As thy hand deep inside a glove,
Thy voice, my love, so sweet,sweet to thine ear,
For even the voice of an angel cannot compare,

How shall I love thee?
To feel thy arms as petals of a rose,
So soft wrapped around me,
As to the poetry you compose,

Thy words fly to thy heart,
As a dove flies to the heavens in the sky,

My love, hold me, look deep into mine eyes,
What do you feel?
What longings do stir within thy own heart?

A love of this sweet rose,
Forever entwined to never depart,

Kiss these silken lips of red,
Longing to be kissed,

come into thy loving arms,
Feel my love of wonderous bliss,

For beauty I find,
Deep within thy soul,

Of poetry and rhyme,
Fantasies beyond thy control,

My dear, My sweet,
Take me away,
Far away from here,

Into thy Heart, thy dreams,
Another time, another year,

I belong to thee,
I ask for thy help to set me free,

Unlock loves hidden chamber inside this maidens
heart,
for only you have thy key to open the deepest part,

Unto forever I will pledge this vow,
To wait for you my love, my soul,
Someway, somehow,

The silken petals of this rose will not wilt away,
She remains forever inside a glass,

She will await,
Day after day...
For thy love to surpass,

To melt Thy heart with thy words so devine,
Words etched forever inside my mind,

So I ask My love, of thee,
Take me upon this voyage across the savage seas,

Rescue me my love, have not a fear,
and until that time arrives,

I will be waiting for thee to appear,
The petals of this rose will drop,
Only one solitary tear.

For you my love...let it be sweet music to thy ears!

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-21-2000).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-06-19 09:05 PM

beautiful and this is the style of poetry
you are known for...
perfect choice to represent your work
jm

X Angel
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since 1999-11-07

Posts 1521
Oregon

2 posted 2000-06-19 09:07 PM

Very sweet!!

I liked this lots!
~Heather

Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

3 posted 2000-06-19 09:55 PM

A perfect poem for a poet named A Romantic Heart

All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

4 posted 2000-06-20 01:10 AM

must admit this is one of my fav's of yours....It gets my vote.

Parker

Colin
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since 1999-06-05

Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England

5 posted 2000-06-20 04:01 PM

Very Shakespearean

Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

6 posted 2000-06-21 12:06 PM

Hi Romantic Heart,

I really love this one thank you for sharing.

Cerenity

bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2000-06-21 02:32 AM

ARH,
I loved the line "Kiss these silken lips of red, longing to be kissed" and the part about the glass and the teardrop, despite myself. Yum.

Mike

Christopher J
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 94

8 posted 2000-06-21 05:20 AM

The title is what got me...and then it only got better..poetry like this belongs in a frame on the mantlepiece.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

9 posted 2000-06-22 10:47 PM

I appreciate your votes thank you!!!

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2000-06-23 12:49 PM

RH,

Perfect my friend....sigh....

LW

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Rose Petal
Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 52
WVa. USA

11 posted 2000-06-29 12:23 PM

Oh I love this, ROSE, anything with roses, I adore!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

12 posted 2000-06-30 02:48 AM

Thank you Lone an Rose, your words are appreciated!

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