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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2000-06-19 07:52 PM


SNOWFLAKE
Gently the snow falls,
as i recall,

Every memory,
with every snowflake,

For each is unique,
made of a different
design,

Some melt fast,
some melt before their time,

See how beautiful and white,
Glowing and glisten in the light,

Falling from heaven,
Like angels above,

Holy and pure,
Each wrapped with love,

If I could be a snowflake,
I would fly to you and land
upon your lips,

I would moisten them with my life,
as I melt away,

Sacrificing my life for your joy,
my happiness
to you for a day,

I would glow and glisten,
Shine my love all around,

Bring smiles upon your face,
and take away your frown,

So each time a snowflake will fall,
remember me as you recall,

This little snowflake poem I wrote for you,
To brighten your days of saddness,
and to say I love you too!



[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-19-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-06-19 07:56 PM


This is so tender and sweet Romantic Heart! It flows so gently, and carries such lovely sentiments, well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
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2 posted 2000-06-19 08:19 PM


I could see this on a winter greeting card...
Nice!
~Heather

Colin
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since 1999-06-05
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Callington, Cornwall, England
3 posted 2000-06-20 03:24 PM


awwwwwwwwww   Sweet like a sugar coated snowflake!

Eric

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.

insect
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since 2000-04-22
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4 posted 2000-06-23 09:56 PM


This is so pretty!
It's got my vote!

Justbleu
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5 posted 2000-06-23 10:57 PM


Miss Romantic One, this is a very pretty piece!!  Snowflakes are amazing things!!  I'm from Alaska and know the beauty of them!!  Well way to write about the uniqueness and beauty of a snowflake!!  I have enjoyed your poetry I've read!!  
Bridgette  


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

bsquirrel
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6 posted 2000-07-01 06:35 PM


As pretty as you are. Hey, you think I'm not gonna comment on the photograph, you got another thing coming!   Thanks for sharing (your words AND your picture).

Mike

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2000-07-02 03:04 AM


Thank you  Mr. Mike for both compliments  and for reading and commenting   on  my poems
HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06
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8 posted 2000-07-03 08:01 AM


This is sweet
and indeed
made my heart here weep
a poem that I shall keep
for I felt it within my heart so deep

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
9 posted 2000-07-03 01:41 PM


Thank you Helmut for that sweet little poem!!
BSC
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10 posted 2000-07-14 11:50 PM


Such a sweet and tender poem, just beautiful.  Bonnie
Mike
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11 posted 2000-07-15 08:01 AM


very nice.  Enjoyed your poem as I always enjoy your style of writing.
Denise
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12 posted 2000-07-15 08:54 PM


I love it too! Very beautifully done!  

Denise

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13 posted 2000-07-16 11:28 AM


RomanticHeart~
A sweet read.
~*Marge*~



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danny
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since 2000-05-09
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14 posted 2000-07-16 12:58 PM


BRIGHTENS THE SPIRIT, SIMPLY THANK YOU


SHE COULD SEE WHERE I WAS BLIND
AND HEAL MY WOUNDS BY TAKING TIME

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
15 posted 2000-07-16 04:51 PM


Thanks for the support guys! and Welcome Danny!
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