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BamaPoet Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 34Dothan, AL USA |
The old man wandered the streets trying the best he could, wondering where he would sleep tonight in this desolate neighborhood. It's been a while since he has eaten his hands begin to shake, he knows he can't go on like this it's about all that he can take. He sees the bag lady across the street with her beat-up shopping cart, the sadness and trouble he sees everyday is enough to break your heart. The gangs, the pushers, the prostitutes all roam the streets at night, danger lurks around every corner from dusk to morning's light. The mission up the street a ways offers a meal for those in need, these angels of mercy do their best for the many that they feed. The old man must now leave you with a message you should hear, "Listen to what I tell you and please don't shed a tear. Don't take your life for granted that everything will go your way, for everything you now have may be taken away someday. It could be YOU sleeping in boxes and eating out of a can, all people like us can do is to ask for a helping hand. Life is full of twists and turns you can get lost along the way, if I had follwed my OWN advice I wouldn't be here today." |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Bama, I liked this one and the topic is certainly worthy. And you're right, it could happen to any of us. fh |
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BamaPoet Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 34Dothan, AL USA |
Thanks Fred! Yes the sad part is, that's very true. I don't know where I got the inspiration for this one, but I'm glad I could speak out on the behalf of the homeless everywhere. "If you love someone, set them free. If they come back to you, they're yours. If not, they never were to begin with." |
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Vaporous One Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 35 |
Strong sentiment, and a great subject that's close to my heart. |
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BamaPoet Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 34Dothan, AL USA |
Thanks Fred! Yes the sad part is, that's very true. I don't know where I got the inspiration for this one, but I'm glad I could speak out on the behalf of the homeless everywhere. "If you love someone, set them free. If they come back to you, they're yours. If not, they never were to begin with." |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
bama..this is so well worth the read..i hope you get more readers (and voters) on this one.. "Life is full of twists and turns you can get lost along the way..." such truth in your words.. dg < !signature--> "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 07-31-2000).] |
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BamaPoet Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 34Dothan, AL USA |
Glad you liked it, and thanks for the comment and the nice words! As the poem says, we shouldn't take life for granted that everything will go our way. 'Cause usually it doesn't. Thanks again. "If you love someone, set them free. If they come back to you, they're yours. If not, they never were to begin with." |
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