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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2000-07-29 01:41 PM



Your Big Chance
~~~


You  ride  the  wind  through  space  and  time
to  search  within  subconscious  mind
You  catch  a  wave  from  distant  source
within  your  cave  receive  its'  force
You  fire  a  rocket  of  pondering  thought
from  the  depths  of  your  knowledge
before  it's  forgot
~
Your  rocket  explodes  to  magnificent  sparks
with  a  beacon  of  light
alive  in  the  dark
Its'  arrow  streaks  true  and  slices  within
to  your  naked  soul
bourn  high  on  the  wind

~
Your  big  chance
~
Now  or  never
~
A  deathly  quiet  envelopes  the  earth
surrounds  your  essence
til  a  pin  can  be  heard
You  become  the  beacon
your  chance  is  now
So  tell  the  world
what  you've  found
~
if  you  can  put  it  in  words
~
and  make  it  quick
they  haven't  got  all  day
~~~




[This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 07-30-2000).]

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AVANTI
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1 posted 2000-07-29 04:29 PM


man that peom had this amazing speed...
i sensed it...
great!

Denise
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2 posted 2000-07-29 09:09 PM


One of my favorites, Rex! Delightful!  

Denise

tracie66
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3 posted 2000-07-30 06:25 AM


Another fantastic read   just love your work
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Marsha
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4 posted 2000-07-30 08:29 AM


Rex, brilliant, a really great read! Love this one.  
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
5 posted 2000-07-30 12:28 PM


AVANTI ... buckle up ... sit back and relax
...come fly the friendly skies of astral revelation

Denise ... thankyou ... it tends to grow on me as well

Tracie ... thankyou ... You're too kind

Marsha ... thankyou for your support ... love to hear from you

dgvarner
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6 posted 2000-07-30 03:35 PM


great one rex!  
(and i love the little martian heehee!)

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran

BSC
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7 posted 2000-07-30 04:11 PM


Love this one Rex, terrific read, and graphics to boot!!!  Bonnie

And thanks for the BD wishes, hope your wife had a great day too!!!

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