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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
the flowers of Jupiter ... the flowers are in bloom on Jupiter this night their cadmium tidal waves swimming in the big storm racing 'cross gaseous prairies crackle of lightning's fire sends them skirmishing a thousand miles in every direction sixteen moons look down to the giant's crimson sty (only specks to infest its (i)ris) begging drinks of nectar from Jove(ian)'s throne the flowers of Jupiter a million times a million and still counting themselves as lucky clovers never lying from needing water never dying from being picked M.A. Miller 07.28.00 < !signature--> My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. [This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 07-28-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
MA--What a wonderous look at Jupiter and a troubling look at earth...tied together with great imagery and thought....click |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
wonderful imagery in this fantastic piece..well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
** hick **... pardon me... oh, i am totally indulged in your wonderful poem, it can expand one's imagination... oh, should i vote? where is the ballot box.. oh.. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Vaporous One Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 35 |
VERY well done! Got my vote. ![]() |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very poetic imaginery good work |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
thanks all for reading ... wasn't too sure about this one at first ... it started in my mind as being far less absract, but we all know how poems have a tendency for change from beginning to end ... thanks again |
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