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Flower Power Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 29Ottawa, Ontario, Canada |
The Rhythm of Love There was once something in the air... A Mambo beat That called to my feet. Or was it the Tango dance That made me take the chance? I think it was the Samba show That made me get up and go. But there was something in the air that night... Was it the Cha-Cha number That made the desire stronger? Perhaps it was the Waltz's romance That pulled me to dance. I prefer to think it was the Fox Trot For, in its softness, I was caught. But there was certainly something in the air... It could have been the Merengue That pushed my thoughts away. But the Rumba rhythm was strong And it could have been that all along. Yet I can't ignore the Swing and the Jive That made me feel more than alive. No, that something in the air that night... Was unmistakably love. ~Stephanie Lafleur [This message has been edited by Flower Power (edited 07-27-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this!! Dance in poetry.  |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
this was great I really enjoyed it |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
I love to dance and this caught me...very nice LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
May I just say, cha cha cha....lol....loved it Stephanie. Juls |
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Flower Power Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 29Ottawa, Ontario, Canada |
Thanks everyone for your wonderful comments. I'm glad you all liked it. Love, Stephanie Lafleur "Can anything be sadder than work unfinished? Yes: work never begun." ~Christina Rossetti |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
What a terrific little dance. Great ending. Bonnie |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Enjoyed this. Like the way you introduced all these dance styles. And love the ending. Was it the beat of the dance that brought me to my feet or my love for you that made the dance so sweet? |
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Flower Power Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 29Ottawa, Ontario, Canada |
That's really cute, Childomine. it fits perfectly! Thanks for your comment. Love, Stephanie Lafleur "Can anything be sadder than work unfinished? Yes: work never begun." ~Christina Rossetti |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
interesting idea about love and motivation. great flow. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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