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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Tender is the storm- That heals a wounded soul, Painstaking is the task- That makes a person whole. Courageous is the heart- That fights the sleeting rain, To find that wounded soul- And take away the pain. Patient is the hand- That soothes a worried brow, Forgives of past mistakes- Teaches only here and now. Trust is the key- To strong internal mending, Tenderly Courageous, Patiently Trusting- Unwavering, Unbending. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (edited 07-27-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I want to be the first to vote for this it has a wonderful message, of course the poet is kind of cute too.... Parker [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 07-27-2000).] |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very well used words... good work If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is wonderful Devina. . . I remember this one. . . so, let me be the third to vote for it!! -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
I really liked this. LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
One of my favorites of yours. Voting! |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Devina that was so lovely.A pleasure to give it my vote. Take care, Juls |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
I guess I missed this one the first time out devina. It's an excellent poem and I'm happy to vote for it. fh |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetDevina~ This is WONDERFUL ! Such wisdom in the phrases ... such gentleness in the soul. Glad to see you, little poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I remember this one too Devina. You got my vote!!!!!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
miss you around here girl!! glad ya submitted for the book this is lovely work take care jm |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You have a tender courageous patient way with words this is exceptionally well written... ...click.... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
all so true well written devina dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very nice Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Devina, this is the first time I've had the pleasure of reading this one ~ what a treasure! Very nicely done! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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