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Martini
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-07-26 06:38 PM


I had given up the hope
of the reuniting I had dreamed of
I had given up the hope
of you and I reuiniting as an "us"
Then to my surprise you
called out to me
the only way you know how
and as ICQ "uh-oh"ed away
and I thought back of yesterdays
You too reminisced
You reminded me of our anniversary
and then asked me out for coffee
And although my mind was saying
that it was a battle that couldn't be won
my heart lead the way
and I met you, late friday
at "our" table in the corner Tim Hortons
We talked about our new lives
We talked about the struggles
I avoided the ever strong topic
and you brought it up
You told me that you realized
that you had thrown away all that mattered
You had let your fears rule your life
and regretted every moment
I told you I missed you too
and had now for three months
that every moment without you
was like a lifetime of misery
and sitting there at the table we knew
the one we sat so many times before
on the night of our would be anniversary
You finally came back to me.


© Copyright 2000 Stephanie McMillan - All Rights Reserved
Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
1 posted 2000-07-27 11:35 AM


I read this and was amazed at how close to home it hit. My husband and I seperated for 3 months and almost got divorced, but now I'm back(not sure yet if it was the right move though). We talked on ICQ and MSN while I was away........AMAZING
LITL,
Heather


With God all things are possible.



Martini
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-07-27 11:54 AM


Heather
I'm glad you read it... and enjoyed
Let your heart lead your way, it will tel you if the decisions you made were right!!  

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

Flower Power
Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 29
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-07-27 11:56 AM


I like this poem mostly because it's so real.....plain language and real settings....it's great.

Love,
Stephanie Lafleur

"Can anything be sadder than work unfinished? Yes: work never begun."
~Christina Rossetti

Geoffrey Sonnen
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since 2000-07-05
Posts 142
Reading, PA USA
4 posted 2000-07-27 12:22 PM


God, how I long for this to come true for me too. I have to agree with Heather in that it hits Home. Fears are ruling my "Significant
Other's" life too. I long to hear, "...regretted every moment". Every moment is a lifetime of misery. Anyway, thank you for sharing this very real and well written offering.

Peace,  Geoffrey

Martini
Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-07-27 01:58 PM


Stephanie
Thanks so much for reading and feeling the realness of this peice, I tried to write this one with a little more imagery and life, but when I finally sat down and it was completed the reality of the situation and the emotions I felt were all I had come up with.

Geoffrey,
thank you too for reading this peice.  I hope in it hitting home it didn't hurt too much.  Everyday for three months I longed to hear those words too, and when I actually did hear them I didn't really believe it was happening...  I can't tell you things have been perfect since, we've had our ups and downs, but there was a reason why we got back together, and there is a lot of good within all of our downs.  If you and her are meant to be together it'll happen and if not then you'll find somebody else who makes you even happier than her.

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

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