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michellemckee Junior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 49Tucson, AZ |
Betrayer Black clouds descending upon me Feeling lost and desperate Strike out Flailing in a sewer of uncertainty Drowning in the lies you told The pain enfolds me and I sink beneath its weight The vile truth of who you are Chokes me with rage and fills me with disgust Betrayer of children Womanizer Emotional predator Your wound your prey leaving it To die in abject horror and pain After you have hunted do you feel satisfied Do you stop hungering for the pain you cause Are you at peace with yourself How can this be so simple for you To walk away from the ones you claimed to love You betrayed my children and me Beware of me Although I am crippled now it is only temporary Leave while you still can If I recover my heart and you still remain close I will tear yours out Leaving it for the vultures and I will never look back Dance like no one's watching. Love like it's never going to hurt. If it does hurt, shoot em! <Grin> |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Oh my, I would say I feel sorry for this person when you are done with them. But I do have to say I know how you feel. LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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Flower Power Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 29Ottawa, Ontario, Canada |
Hi Michelle, I don't know if this poem is about yourself, but I must say that it truly represents what a woman in that position would feel. Thanks for sharing it. Love, Stephanie Lafleur |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Michelle, this is one powerful poem, and I'd feel sorry for anyone that might be the one that would hurt you.... Got my vote. Parker |
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minstrel Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 21Bowling Green, KY |
A very realisitic portrayel of how we often feel when betrayed by those that we thought cared for us. It seems you put a lot of emotion into it. I could feel the shock and rage in result to the betrayel. minstrel |
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