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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Panes break away stubborn bird i hope your southern flight is rewarding comforting, bordering heaven arena of plumes, pink fire graceful in the very depths of simplicity sigh of my sigh, vapors on the glass (tear-stained-glass) sayonara today-forever just as the flamingo dazzles and displays my every weakness blinding with beauty you do as well glamorous even more in your own eyes i stare out through the years the windows ofthis soul now cracked the rain seeps in feathers on the sill scattered and tossed by restless wind your wings/my prayers: separate through your escape go join your V formation I know where you are going off to a new-found love sayonara today-forever By Todd-Michael Phillips |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
This conjures up a lovely vision..  HUGS "If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put the foundations under them." |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Thanx Rainbow Girl for that vote of confidence! |
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Tallulah Junior Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 28 |
I am now an official fan! Lovely freeverse imagery. |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Tallulah: You always make me feel warm & fuzzy inside! |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
SAD BUT TRUE WORDS... well expressed If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Avanti: Thank you for your observation & appreciation! [This message has been edited by Toddles (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
I want to thank everyone who has given me such positive feedback on this particular piece... Merci!!!!! |
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