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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
THE MOMENT TO TREASURE Don’t say a word, darling ‘Cause I understand Your pretty eyes are Lost beneath the weary skies. Please enjoy this moment We both longed for Though this can not last It’ll remain in my heart. Whether you remember The things you said You will hold onto my soul Lest it wanders astray. The gaze of your eyes Catches the last of crimson clouds Here in my dream I shall treasure all. - James P.S, thanks to the support of my dearest friend, Lynne, who urged me to post this one in this forum, most of you should have seen this one before, in the Corner Pub. Version 1.02 (Wonder changed to wander. hehe, thanks you, Lynne for your ever-growing criticizm on my poems and also I thank all others in this forum) - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I really like this one. Beautifully written yet wistful in content. Love it! Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well written poem... good work If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
just popped in to vote..you already know i love this dg "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Description of a very intimate intense moment. Holding on to that kind of dream is truly a treasure. Very good writing! |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very beautiful LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
nice job. beautiful theme. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Thank you everyone for your kind support - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Oops double post |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Oops double post - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
^_^ Well, you already know I love this poem.. ^^ I am glad u posted it for voting.. A note.. I think you are meant to only type the poem, in the body of your submission, else the message is also submitted.. I just saw this written in reply to another poets work.. ^^ Hehe, thanx James.. u don't really need to thank me tho.. ^^ (double post?? trile, hehe.. ) Luv, < !signature--> Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu [This message has been edited by Yu Lan (edited 07-22-2000).] |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Can I vote again??? No.. hehe.. what a shame.. *_^ *bumping up for more, well deserved votes..* Luv, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu (Please e-mail me at yu_lan_wen_@hotmail.com instead of the e- |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Thank you, Lynne.. I really don't find this poem so attractive, but if you like it.. hehe - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
I just read your poem in the book, James.. I'm sorry your title was misunderstood, 's a shame, but your poem is still just as good. Man, it is so neat reading all the poems of poets I know, published together.. It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold. |
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