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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Once cocooned in darkness, Now forced into the light, Until he feels his mother's touch, He'll wage his mighty fight. So clear the eyes of innocence, Of this child, just minutes old, The secrets behind them hiding, Dismissed, forgotten, untold. He has the look of an aged man, With a furrowed, troubled brow, Frowning almost as if he knows, The struggles life will endow. Tightly in a blanket wrapped, Placed gently in her arms, Contented sighs of comfort, Protected from life's harms. [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 06-24-2000).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
BSC......love it ! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
BSC, A and a vote. Mike |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is precious, Bonnie! Denise |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Absolutely dear!! What a treasure this piece is!! Thank You for sharing it!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
oh oh oh I love this! I want one! a little blonde haired, blue eyes girl *sigh* wunnderful poem ~Heather |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Thank you all for your kind replies, ... Heather, how about dark hair, brown eyes???? |
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monte Junior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 33 |
I am truly amazed. Everyday I begin to read the poetry there is a new one of yours. Another vote for BSC |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Definitely one of my favorites of yours, Bonnie. Adding it to my library. Elizabeth |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
*trying to get this back in the library* |
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