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BSC
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0 posted 2000-07-19 04:35 PM



I could hear the cherubs laughter,
As they leapt from cloud to cloud,
Off to the side all by himself,
A little one sat, head bowed.
Walking over and kneeling down,
I asked him what was wrong,
With elbows perched on chubby legs,
He told his tale in song.
The sweetest voice I've ever heard,
Perfectly hit each note,
As he related his little worries,
About his troublesome coat.
Shortly I came to realize,
He was singing of his wings,
Believing they were much to small,
"I'll never fly," he sings.
I took his little hand in mine,
And placed him on my knee,
So he could see the others,
Their small wings flying free.
I heard the softest, sweetest gasp,
As something brushed my arm,
His downy feathers gently flapped -
He turned around in alarm.
Suddenly he was soaring,
Surprise in his big blue eyes,
His giggles like delicate music,
As he glided through the skies.
Knowing that forevermore,
Those wings would see him through,
His halo brightly glowing,
As away with the others he flew.
Over the clouds and through the stars,
Playing hide 'n seek with the sun,
These precious little cherubs,
By His side, and having fun.

© Copyright 2000 Bonnie Church - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2000-07-19 06:59 PM


BSC,
Beautiful read you get my vote.

jamesjiao
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Backwaters of Avalon
2 posted 2000-07-19 07:03 PM


Such a lovely poem. BSC.. Little angels are everywhere, and it's up to us to find them out and help them to stretch their little wings.

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.



Gossamerwings
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3 posted 2000-07-19 07:20 PM


This is simply magnificent. So sweetly beautiful.I adore this!    


*I would like to suggest that you write with Sunny1*


Gossamerwings ;)

AVANTI
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4 posted 2000-07-19 11:56 PM


very lovely poem...
very hopeful to see an angel now...after reading this one...
very sweet

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


Heather Miller
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Bryan, Ohio USA
5 posted 2000-07-20 12:49 PM


Very touching. Thank you.
LITL,
Heather

With God all things are possible.

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2000-07-20 08:55 PM


Bonnie~
How very precious !
You've such a tender heart.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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epoet
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7 posted 2000-07-20 09:20 PM


heart touching poem.  like this one

P. J. Kotrch
carpe diem
A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love


L Tiuch
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8 posted 2000-07-20 11:52 PM


Beautifully written!  I can see the cherubs so clearly.  You have my vote.
tracie66
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9 posted 2000-07-21 03:12 AM


WOW what imagery you etched in my mind...thanks for the beautiful read  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Rex Allen McCoy
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10 posted 2000-07-21 09:23 AM


beautiful poem Bonnie ... very well written and the subject simply devine

tracie66
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11 posted 2000-07-22 03:43 AM


         just had to come back again  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Fred Hobbs
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12 posted 2000-07-22 10:36 AM


BSC,
Nice read, I enjoyed it all the way through.  Interesting topic. . .

monte
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13 posted 2000-07-23 07:10 AM


Very nice, you have my vote.
ethome
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14 posted 2000-07-23 07:28 AM


Lovely poem from the other side. Great imagination, great scenes of kindness and love...
BSC
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15 posted 2000-07-23 10:46 PM


Thank you all so much, first for reading, and for all of your kind replies.  They are all so very appreciated.  Bonnie
Kit McCallum
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16 posted 2000-07-24 11:07 AM


Oh you touched my heart with this wonderfully delightful poem BSC ... beautiful!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Denise
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17 posted 2000-08-06 09:53 PM


This is precious, Bonnie! Very sweet!

Denise

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