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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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(He said it.) Deep within-- a power failure of my soul. (He did it.) Did it once again. Instantly, I'm withered, old... (He broke it.) So it might stay the same... (shattered) chards of love remain. (He's sorry.) As he always is... (broken) Cupid's arrow missed. I heave no sob, whimper no weep... silent river, down my cheeks. So common now, that I forget, and wonder why my face is wet. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
neat format, I liked this Serenity (and I love yer pen name....) ~Heather  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Loved it, yet it makes me sad!!  Very nice!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Sigh, sad... but you. Smile seren'. |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Wow! What a wonderful poem, yet so sad.. I like your format as well. Wonderful job. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm fifth here too serenity!!! Beautiful. .. . just love it. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Melancholy and beautiful, serenity. YES! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I was hoping you would submit this one... yep yep... needs to be there  winkie winkie jm |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
This is very nicely done very deserving of a page in time |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Serenity, I really liked this. Actually I voted for it...need I say more. Linda M. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ The beauty that is you ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Sad, well written, wonderful Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very sad Serenity. The tears are shared as you have brought them to my eyes also. Very nice poem. Rich |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
crying again, just in awe at the kindness of everyone here...(geez, I'm a mess...gotta get these hormones checked...) |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
serenity, very nicely done. Loved it. Must be in the hormones... |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
*bump*  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was most excellent! I'm sure so many can relate to this one, me included! I'm glad I got to see this one! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to Parker and Dovie, it is much appreciated...oh...and Chris...for the bump!!! MOST appreciated. |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
It touched me much!!!!!!! LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
So sad, yet so very well written, this is so heartfelt. Love it. Bonnie |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very different style... great work If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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shadow of poetry Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 76midwest usa |
oh wow when you do (this) i dont know if i've seen that done before it makes the poem another one for my library file so sad but still so cool |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is excellently done, Serenity! I'm sorry, I thought I had already voted for this. Well, I'll just have to do it now! Denise |
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