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Justbleu
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0 posted 2000-07-17 12:48 PM


Frosted trees
White covered peaks
With you I am free
Just alone with you
Is all I dream
Whispers in the wind
Blood rushing through
Deeply in my veins
Captured by your glance
Lost in a trance
Within the romance
You and I in God's Perfect dance


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"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown




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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-07-17 02:07 AM


JustBleu~
Yeah .... !  
Really nice.
~*Marge*~


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Rex Allen McCoy
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2 posted 2000-07-17 02:17 AM


desires beautifully expressed Bridgette
you'll have more than a few taking dancing lessons


Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-07-17 08:24 PM


This is nice, JB...

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ



AVANTI
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4 posted 2000-07-18 12:03 PM


such a sweet forever momnet...
I like the end...
you and I god's perfect dance...
Never thought of it like that
well done


If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


Not A Poet
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5 posted 2000-07-18 04:14 PM


Really nice. Enjoyed it much.

Thanks,
Pete

Justbleu
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6 posted 2000-07-21 11:56 AM


Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!!      

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Heather Miller
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7 posted 2000-07-21 01:17 PM


Very lovely. Gave me a warm feeling.  

With God all things are possible.

Lone Wolf
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8 posted 2000-07-21 08:50 PM


Justbleu,

Wonderful!!  Great writing!  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
9 posted 2000-07-23 09:53 PM


Thank You all this is short and sweet...someone said I should submit this one...I was really skeptical cuz, I do not think it is one of my best!!  
Bridgette  


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Sven
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10 posted 2000-07-23 11:23 PM


This is wonderful. . . I really like it. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


BSC
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11 posted 2000-08-07 07:28 PM


"Just you and I in Gods perfect dance".... indeed....this is so beautiful.  Bonie
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