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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Frosted trees < !signature-->White covered peaks With you I am free Just alone with you Is all I dream Whispers in the wind Blood rushing through Deeply in my veins Captured by your glance Lost in a trance Within the romance You and I in God's Perfect dance "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 07-17-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JustBleu~ Yeah .... ! Really nice. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
desires beautifully expressed Bridgette you'll have more than a few taking dancing lessons |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is nice, JB... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
such a sweet forever momnet... I like the end... you and I god's perfect dance... Never thought of it like that well done If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Really nice. Enjoyed it much. Thanks, Pete |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!! "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very lovely. Gave me a warm feeling. With God all things are possible. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Justbleu, Wonderful!! Great writing! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You all this is short and sweet...someone said I should submit this one...I was really skeptical cuz, I do not think it is one of my best!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is wonderful. . . I really like it. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
"Just you and I in Gods perfect dance".... indeed....this is so beautiful. Bonie |
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