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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
how close was i to heaven... how right it felt to touch the sky. i almost held a star in my hand-- but i blinked and the star fell away. my heart turned blue... my soul fell empty. i must close my eyes to heaven, recoil into the palm of my hand, where only i will hold me-- and only i will know the season of my soul... --dgvarner "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DGVarner~ This has an ache about it ... may someone see your star and make a wish on it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
"SIGH" but very wonderful poem here, thanks for sharing. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee that's what a meant, the difference between Picasso and a painter and decorator, they both paint, but........ and that's the difference. Well done, it's beauty, in every line! Guess now everyone knows I like this! : /font> [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 07-31-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dgvarner, Thought provoking and well done. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
marge: yes.. definate ache here..found the PERFECT man right about jan 1st..come a mth later we both find out he got a girl pregnant at a new yrs party!! yikes!! colored him gone.. cerenity: thanks for reading..i appreciate your reply! marsha marsha marsha..youre my biggest fan! of course i love hearing from you!! just call me picasso..(if you say so...LOL) seymour: thanks for the encouragment! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- OUCH! Guess that would make him the 'not so perfect man'. Glad I stumbled onto this one. I love it, ache and all. You've got my vote. luv ya, tricks "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks tricks..i can always count on you! (btw..i'm still pretty sure he was the perfect man..BUT....the "pregnant girl" got to him first! L'ingOL) dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- really love this one. thought it needed to be bumped up a little so everyone could enjoy it. -tricks |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
another good one I must say you are turning out some fine work. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
oh to be so close.... so close to heaven... you have penned the feeling well! nicely done. -doreen |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
tricks..thanks for the bump! ethome, doreen..thanks so much for reading and for your replies "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Beautiful as is the norm for you! Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
jamie: the "norm" for me wow..thank you so much!! appreciate your reading me!! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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