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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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theres a moment between sleep and dream where my heart aimlessly wanders. theres a fire being snuffed somewhere in a soul with used-up wishes. only sadness remains. laughter heals the wounds but for a moment. love is something far away... theres a second when my heart forgets and boldly believes again-- but seconds fade, and memories linger-- and scars dont wash away... --dgvarner "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Very bittersweet, with words spoken so true! Debbie |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks debbie, for your reply.. i wrote this with the on-again/off-again realization that i no longer had a marriage and i and my baby were now living with my mom, who was gracious enough to take us in--me with no job..it got real lonely sometimes...  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- bittersweet, yes; but beautiful as well. "there's a moment between sleep and dream where my heart aimlessly wanders..." I love this!  "...and memories linger- and scars don't wash away... "...live today to it's full potential trust in the Lord for courage and strength and even the scars may someday disappear from view" -vlraynes as usual you have touched my heart. luv ya bunches, tricks "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-31-2000).] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Hi DGV I only saw this today and realized it was the same title that I posted in the pub a couple of days ago,I've been absent due to a family loss. When I read it, it seems we are coming at the same theme,of loss, from a slightly different angle,now that's POETIC. I'll change my title if you wish me to. Sorry about the error.  Jon |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
tricks: the wounds are lessening...the scars are fading..  (hoping they'll wash away someday..) thanks..jon: is it necessary to change either of our titles? dont people sometimes have the same song titles? these are our songs my friend dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I pinched myself as soon as my eyes began to water. Your word reach places deep within us. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
jamie..hey now, no pinching! if it reaches you, go with it... much appreciate your reply! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
dg - this is so heart wrenching, and written so beautifully. It certainly does tug at those strings. Bonnie |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Yep, t'was there (again/still) m'self last night... in less eloquent words than thine... it sux |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- oops. just forgot to vote on this the first time. -tricks |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
this work is so beautifully done..I enjoyed it immensely....voting |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
bonnie: glad to tug at your heartstrings thanks for letting me LOL christopher: oh christopher, i dont wish anyone to be in that place..eloquent or otherwise! tricks: thanks a bunch! ethome: your replies are so very appreciated! thank you!dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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