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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Easy Remembering ~*Marge Tindal*~ Today you returned to rest upon my cheek as a tear After all this time it caught me in amaze As I reached up to brush you away you clung to my fingertips I caressed you smiling with easy-remembering at all the wonderful thoughts you left with me It was then I realized that even though we aren't together you were worth remembering Somewhere I think the same song is playing my memory for you I just wanted to let you know it's okay ... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
"rest upon my cheek as a tear"... what a line... what a theme, great poem... Marge, I think I remember this one being posted earlier by you in open 7, correct me if I am wrong... Whatever, this one is great wonderful poetry regards, sudhir |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Marge; this is sooooo romantic and beautiful! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Marge, this is so softly beautiful  Voted |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ You are correct ... and yesterday I shared it with a co-worker who encouraged me to submit it for book consideration. Thank you for your lovely comments. Ellie~ Thank you honey. And it happened exactly that way ... on the remembrance of a song that brought me a surprising avalance of remembering. I appreciate your comments. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ You sneaked up on me ... like a tear did on that day ! Thank you, dear. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You write with gorgeous simplicity Marge(y)...I can see... K |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kamla~ And YOU sweet poet - just made my day ! I appreciate knowing that what I write is 'seen' by another. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
interesting poem. wonderful job. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
you picked your words and formed it so well nice flow... liked it If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EPoet~ Thank you ... I appreciate it. Avanti~ Actually the words 'picked' me and fell to the page after a real moment of recall. Thank you for liking the flow. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Marge, I love reading your poems! This one, like all of yours that I have read is simply wonderful! Debbie |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
your poetry always puts a smile on my face and a warmth in my heart... (might be because you write from the heart, *smile*) add a vote. |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Marge, This is just beautiful, and oh, how those memories linger. I love this. Bonnie |
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Bustem57 Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 98 |
You are such a talented writer!! Thank you!!I wish I could write as well as you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Debbie~ Thank you. I hope I give you many more to read. Mike~ You do know this poet well. Within my heart - the best do dwell. Bonnie~ Thank you, hon. The memory was as fresh as the day we drew it. Bustem~ I don't know what to say - except a very sincere thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a real gem, Marge! Very beautifully done! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thank you, my friend. Know what ? ... This little piece has endeared itself to me -not because it's a great literary work, but because it shot straight from my heart ! I'm glad to share it and am pleased to know that it touches others. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, this is exactly what I was saying about a spark of truth, athough in your case this is a laser beam, and it punched clear through to me. Just beautiful.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ Thank you for the glowing reply. I so enjoy what I do and it's so refreshing to know that it touches others. (sorry 'bout the 'punch') ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
VOTE |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ Shhhhhhh ! I won't tell ! You know how much I appreciate you ! Thanks, luv ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This one is a definete relating to poem. I liked the part about resting on your cheek as a memory. What a beautiful way of putting it. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Temptress~ Thank you for the reply. I told the story of how this came to be in another forum ..... driving along from work ... radio played a tune ... I was caught in a moment of amazement when I realized the tear that rested upon my cheek ... bringing a flood of tender memories. Just kind of sneaked right up on me. Glad you liked it and thanks for letting me know. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is lovely Marge!!! Loved it!! So simple, so sweet!! Sounds like a treasured memory!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge easy rememberings of this one...what a treasure so glad you submitted itTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JustBleu~ Thank you. It is a treasure that my heart holds. Tracie~ Thanks, hon. It has become a favorite memory of mine. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
How beautiful! It's amazing how somethings can jog a memory without us ever knowing what it us. You have my vote. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I've had my eye on this one, and just got to read it. Another vite, dear, for another gem Liz |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh Marge~ sometimes I wonder if you can see right into my heart, this is something I just had happen to me. Needless to say, but I'll say it any way~ I LOVED THIS!!! voting..... -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Very nice poem as well as the thoughts behind it. Thanks, Pete |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
This was so beautiful, glad I got to read it  )I am really enjoying this page. I just joined last night and am loving all this wonderful poetry. Maybe one day I'll have the guts to add one. LITL, Heather Anne Miller/Gambler With God all things are possible. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LTuich~ Yes, it's amazing the way they come flowing when the heart remembers. Thank you. Lizzie,gal~ You're a sweetie ! Glad you had a moment to read and enjoy. SEA~ You touch my heart by letting me know I've touched yours. Thanks ... glad you had your 'Easy Remembering' too. NotAPoet~ Thank you ... glad you liked. Heather~ Welcome to Passion's. You'll find much to enjoy here among friends and talented poets. Feel the joy of getting your feet wet and post one ... you'll find it addicting ! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed this one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*sigh* "Today you returned to rest upon my cheek as a tear" *HUGE SIGH* beautiful, just beautiful ~H |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
It will be "easy to remember" this one, dear Marge ... beautiful thoughts! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
XAngel~ You took the words right out of my mouth ! Tee-Hee ! So glad it caught you in a sigh ! It has quickly become a personal favorite of mine. Kit~ Thanks so much for the sweet reply. Hard to forget an endearing memory, huh ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I KNOW I already voted for this a long time ago... i dont know what happend... must of got lost in a glitch or crash??? between ceres and my computer anything can happen.. either way..Im glasd i checked back.... one of my favs by you!!! gotta be in the book!!!  later gator jm |
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dad-o-8 New Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 8 |
Cherished memories are dredged from the past with these incredible lines....congrats maiden............lovya.>>---------->>W. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ I'm glad you came by too. This one has become a sentimental favorite of mine also. Hope that sore throat is all-better. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ Dad-o-8~ I would have known you'd like this one, my sentimental friend. Thank you >>~~~~~~~~>My ~Warrior~ *Hugs* *Peace* *Love* ~*Maiden*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Highlighting this one for a friend to easily locate~  Well ... it might not 'bump' ... but at least you can find it on the Daily Topics page~  Thank you for asking~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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