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Linzi
Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 35
Pennsylvania, USA

0 posted 2000-07-11 01:10 PM


5 am
4th of July
You comment
on the starry sky
The cold grass
And sharp night air
Nowhere I'd rather be
than there
But it's late, Sleep calls
Fall off the ground
And float to your door
Like no one's around
Tiptoe loudly
Down the stairs
And ignore your bold,
and close-eyed stare
Climb, lazily, into your head
And pull the covers over my eyes
Scent of cologne on your pillow
Swin high through your complex mind
Just being here
Amongst your posessions
I feel complete
and lost in obsession
Warmth fills the air
and daybreak fills my soul
I know i'll have to leave with the stars
But right now I know I'm home
Drift off to sleep
With a smile on my breath
You, all around me
A haze in my head
It's quiet now
Just you and I
Here in my dreams
On the 4th of July




~*~Linzi~*~

"Ignore reality; there's nothing you can do about it" ~ Natalie Imbruglia


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MagnoliaBlue
Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367

1 posted 2000-07-11 01:33 PM


Lovely writing!  

MagnoliaBlue


~My Skipper Jim
I love you!
Your Lady June~

epoet
Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291
grand rapid,MI, usa
2 posted 2000-07-11 10:49 PM


interesting.

P. J. Kotrch
carpe diem
A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love


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