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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand 
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Sacred Serenity Sweet moonlight, kissing cool waters, As the lake lazily twiddles its thumbs. Starry skies match starry eyes; I am dreamily delighted by serenity surrounding me. Little creatures skitter cautiously Through overgrown undergrowth behind me. A candy coated breeze Giggles amongst the daisies in the grass, And little, naughty dandelions, Blow fluffy seeds into my eyes. This is my sacred place, and my sacred time. A vision in my mind. -Lynne Chudley Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely beautiful, Lynne! Denise |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
What a stunning poem, truly stunning, visual and full of feeling.  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A beautiful visual, Lynne, wonderful writing regards, sudhir |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
hey YU! very expressive and touching i think i have been there before... maybe in the sixties? Great job! bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is my sacred place, and my sacred time. A vision in my mind. Just beautiful !! |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
thank you very much.. Denise, sudhir, Daniel, Dark Angel.. thank you welcome to Passions Marsha ^_^ And thank you for replying, with such kind words, ^_^ Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Of course I had to vote for this! First saw it in Corner Pub, where serenity was lurking in the shadows...smile...never forgot it. Excellent work, I love it. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
WOW WOW WOW Thsi is fantastic! I love the visuals I got from this piece Yu! "Sweet moonlight, kissing cool waters, As the lake lazily twiddles its thumbs" "A candy coated breeze Giggles amongst the daisies in the grass" Absolutely wonderful pictures you've painted here! ~*Irie loves it and gets her vote*~ ~Sheri |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Lynne... yes I know this one, I think this one's one of the most beautiful poems you wrote. I hope your heart is just like what you described in your poem... - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thank u serenity.. yes, hehe.. u r sacred.. ^^ Irie.. thank you! ^_^ Well I am glad I could paint such pictures for you.. *_^ James.. thank you.. hey u really think so? I quite like it, I think.. *_^ I'm glad u do too.. ^^ thank u all.. Luv, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh, how beautiful is this poem.....What a picture you have painted with your words. Bonnie |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thank you Bonnie.. ^^ I don't know how I can have missed your work.. I haven't read any.. yet.. ^^ Luv, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Excellent! That's where I wanna be Liz |
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