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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Is this where I post a poem for the book?? I have not been very poetic lately, but I hope this older poem will gain me entry. Storm Clouds Horizon s eye matted shut Against the jamb; weeping The turbulence of birth. From westward, white-hot fingers Scratch the dark. Rumbling Contractions, the fissured womb Ruptures, howling full term, Conception s fury. Robert Barcus < !signature--> if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. [This message has been edited by RobertB (edited 07-10-2000).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Hi Robert ... good to see you this is the place yes But you need to submit the poem to the book before we can vote on it  edit the poem and click the box that says submit to book |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Robert... great to see you back... this is a fine piece... i wanna vote, too!!! When you come back and edit and click where it says to submit for the book, I'll be back to vote.  doreenWhatever you do, don't bring Yoko to band practice. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thanks you guys! I miss this place....I need to come back home.....can this prodigal son return??? if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Robert! Nice to see you here, glad you could make it. And yes, we can (and do) vote for your poem here. Thanks!  |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
you bet he can ... with a hearty welcome back ... voting ... Rex |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
PDV.....it is nice to "see" you again. Rex....I'm a comin' home. Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Geoffrey Sonnen Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142Reading, PA USA |
Incredible writing. Shows power of a storm ! Thanks for resubmitting this. *vote* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Hey, Robert, I've been missing you! Glad to see you back! I remember this poem well! You've got my vote! Denise |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thanks Geoffrey....nice to meet you!! Denise......hehehehe...checks in the mail!! PS: my BIG computer is back!!!!! Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Robert ol' buddy ol' pal! You're coming home? WOOHOO!! Miss ya round here! *V* |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Hey "Becca!!!!!! I been missin' you too!!!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RobertB~ Welcome home ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Yo, bob, it's such a wild poem.. what a start for your return.. thoroughly enjoyed it, man!! 100 thumbs up for this one!!/ - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ya they are all in the Right... 'tis true that this is a great poem for a come-back... even otherwise, this one is great... Enjoyed the read... Robert, and welcome back, regards, sudhir |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow , Robert I really love this, Excellent!! voting Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Incredible piece Robert...liked it indeed Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
What a welcome back!!!! I am indebted to all of you!!!!! Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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