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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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It was an ordinary day Children were fighting Husband was snarling Coffee cold and breakfast late See them off from the garden gate Come inside and tidy up Krissy's schoolbook, hubby's cup Clean the mirrors, wash the floor Talk to walls and hope for more It was an ordinary day It was an ordinary smile Birds were singing My heart was ringing Sunshine hot and sky so blue As I smile and remember you Come inside back to my home Forget that all they do is moan Smile at the telly, laugh at the door Knowing you gives me more It was an ordinary smile |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Hi, liked your poem. Appreciate the lightheartedness of it. Like your style, the "telly" made me look to see where you were from, and I guessed right England. I would love to see more of your writing. I like the English twist on things. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Cute..I liked it...  |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I like poems like this ... made me smile tonight  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
...LOL  GREAT POEMvery funny Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ This was an interesting read to me. I was caught with the idea of - 'It was an ordinary smile' .... When a smile given from another ends up on my face ... It causes me to realize the power of a smile. I enjoyed this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Septsong thank you  Poet deVine glad you liked it Rex we can all do with a smile now and then so I'm glad it worked  Tracie you know I admire your work so I'm really happy that this one brought a smile.  Marge thank you that's exactly what I meant. |
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Geoffrey Sonnen Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142Reading, PA USA |
I felt very happy when I read this. Need a little of that. It's very cute and has my vote, but I couldn't ! Can you fix that ? If you can, I'll be back Peace, Geoffrey |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A simple smile can change everything! This is very nice! Thanks for the smile! Denise |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sorry Geof didn't think this was good enough fot the book, so didn't mark the option. Glad you liked it. Denise, while you were posting a reply here I was posting a reply on yours spooky! Or it could be just plain coincidence. Really glad you liked it. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is really cute marsha smiles are contagious arent they..and a much needed little thing when the day starts out as rather ordinary--or bland! LOLdg "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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