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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2000-07-09 04:42 PM


         From out the mist

Out of the mist of time she came,
Without a notice, without a name.
And I, cannot ford the broad gist.
Nor explain the beginnings mist.

She showered in wanton need.
Her face upturned and drank the deed.
Stirred her cauldron and fired jewels.
Deified the set forever rules.

She is the giver and the tender,
The reigning tyrant and mender.
I cannot troll beyond her teach.
Nor can I pole beyond her reach.

I catch the echo's of her let,
By force of heart and seismic net.
Repeat the ringing and the toll.
Here in the chambers of my soul.

What conjuration could I use
To calm the dragon of this muse?
I'd fire and fuse the cauldron new  
Perhaps to change this primal view.

I'd hover o'er the why of things.
If only I, had dragon wings?


© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Jamie
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Blue Heaven
1 posted 2000-07-09 05:03 PM


Perhaps a set of my firefighting gear??
Great poem

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-07-09 11:19 PM


One of your best Sy!
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3 posted 2000-07-10 03:09 AM


Seymour~

From the mist
of poet's pen
another jewel
another gem

'Out of the mist of time she came,
Without a notice, without a name'

You are simply wonderful.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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4 posted 2000-07-10 04:42 AM


Oh Sy this one left me wanting alot more...sorry feeling a little greedy today  
this was a fantastic read
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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5 posted 2000-07-10 07:03 AM


You are the best
Liz

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

6 posted 2000-07-10 06:08 PM


for this wonderment of enchanting rhyme...
to not be in the book, would be a crime  
perfect sy
jm

I think I could need - this in my life
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
there's a little bit of something me
In everything in you
MB20

Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03
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7 posted 2000-07-11 10:56 AM


Very nice Sy. Enjoyed it much.

Thanks,
Pete

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
8 posted 2000-07-11 12:14 PM


Now where have I read this before...

of course when I read this last time a few minutes ago... I have been re-reading this one many times now...

Seymour, this is great...

regards, sudhir.

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
9 posted 2000-07-11 12:39 PM


Brilliant Seymour!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie
                  


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Martie
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10 posted 2000-07-11 04:57 PM


Oh Sy...I just love this one!!  You are the best!
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2000-07-12 08:29 AM


To all my wonderful friends above, I'm sorry it took so long to thank you all. Sheer oversight, it won't happen again. *L*
AVANTI
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12 posted 2000-07-12 12:02 PM


good poem
well written

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2000-07-13 07:32 AM


Avanti,
Thank you for the like and vote.

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