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Beverley
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since 2000-07-09
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0 posted 2000-07-09 03:58 PM


Over

How can something so perfect die
How can you believe I told a lie
You thought I was untrue
There's only ever been you
Only ever you

How can something so golden fade
How can you smash the love we made
You thought that I was lying
Now our love is dying
Our love is dying


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Denise
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1 posted 2000-07-09 04:15 PM


You forgot to select the Book Submission option, Beverly. Very sad poem. Sometimes I don't think there is an answer, at least not a satisfactory one.

Denise

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2000-07-09 04:32 PM


So sad ... well written
We see these questions most every day ... we ask them ourselves from time to time
Who knows why love infringes upon insanity ... New found love especially ... combined with infatuation ... can cause us to do strange things ... even think strange things
..... sorry for rambling ....

Rex

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