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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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From high above this where she came Born from a silver streak of flame She tore a trail consumed my soul Burning passion I can't control Her beauty described in mere words A sweeter song than morning birds Who ever hope and ever try To please her as she passes by When she dips and when she bends Her graceful body never ends And when I look into her eyes I see a fire that never dies Watching her dance toward the ground The greatest entrance makes no sound And then forever life has worth I've seen where heaven touched the earth [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 06-19-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
You got my vote on this one....it's brill! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Walt, this is beautiful! This one definently got my vote!  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
wayout! this is spot on! I love this poem my dear friend ~H *vote* |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Heaven's touch it is! I vote for this one... regards, sudhir |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Good job Walt Regards, Eric "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Great one Walt... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
A truly angelic poem, Walt! Joy |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
One of your best Walt!!! |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
I loved this one . It got my vote.~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry W |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Walt, I'm reminded of that message when you said you wished you could write like me. Why the hell you wanna do that? -- you write like yourself just beautifully. Awesome work.Mike |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You go, wayout... keep those votes and letters coming, folks...  |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Wow Walt! I've never read any of your work before, but this is wonderful! Definetly enjoyed, you have my vote! Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Walt, this is pure beauty...you've got my vote too! *Krista Knutson* "Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~ "We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~ |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
I am not telling who I am voting for - leave ya in suspense. But got to say this is a wonderful piece Walt - -----Now where is that little votey thing at?---- Suspense, shall I find it? Do I know where to vote? -- ~netswan |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Heavenly thoughts, Walt... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
No question Walt ... my favorite of yours to date! Beautiful, simply wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Well Done!!! I like it!!!! Bridgette "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." -Unknown |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walt~ this is so great! It flowed perfectly. -SEA |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh, this is just so (for lack of a better word)-- beautiful. Bonnie |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
One more vote for the Texan... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
perfect poem to represent your work very nice indeed jm |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
its a pleasure to vote for this |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
WOOOO, count one more vote for Mr. Walt |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wow, W.O.W. |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
A very beautiful poem... loved it...write more, i want to see them. Got your email.. thanks And guess what? I came back to vote. Love it... touched the earth..mmm [This message has been edited by linda munday (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
hiya walt-a-roony! I think this is great, especially the last stanza. I would have one suggestion for you though... I might consider changing: Who ever hope and ever try To: "Whoever hopes and ever tries It would still maintain the excellent rhyme scheme you've worked up here and at the same time fix it just a wee bit, perhaps make it stronger! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i want to say thank you for all the replies this one has recieved...sincerely i am most happy and yuh |
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Elyse Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 414Apex (think raleigh) NC |
smiles from me luv Elyse |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Strong tug on the heartstrings with this one, Walt. My vote's in...... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ I'm with Balladeer on this one - *Tug* with a *hug* ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Walt I remember this one! This is one of your best for sure! I really love this one! You totally out did yourself here! Tugger for sure |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Wow Walt, very very nice, Heaven touched Earth. Pete |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Walt, I can't believe I missed this!!, this is beautiful! My favourite of your works most definatley. You have my vote. Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Passion on Passion Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Definitely a keeper , my way-out friend Doc |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Walt, This is superb. I love it Liz |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I love the ethereal and romantic feel of this haunting poem. Beautiful! Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Way to go Walt !  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wow, Walt does a serious, superb poem! I'm old enough to vote, so I shall! Corinne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
One of your very best, Walt! I remember this one well! Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Nup...you can't write poetry Walty...not at all...snort absolutely wonderful my friend... K |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wonderous *sigh* I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh walt lets hope the heavens touch you forever more as this is such a beautiful piece she has inspired in you...Good one Walt Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Walt, this poem truly has stolen a place in my heart. You made me cry the first time I read this - and that ain't so easy a task, my friend. Glad to see you chose to submit this one. Michael |
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