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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration 
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She bathes my heart in smile, a sun-lit field of free. Her loving mind an isle, dip't in eternity. And in her charming grace, she reaches out to hold Lost dreams I thought erased into the pasts of old. Like a feather falling, her words float through my mind. In whisp'red words calling, her hopes for me to find. Can this feeling be, the beatings of a "care?" How is it I can see, a life in living shared? A whiff of roses blue each time I touch her soul, Shows unto me of true love's e'er enticing pull. E'en were I to deny new faith upon my lips, My heart longs only try... imagining her kiss. Yearn I only touch her silken wisps of joy. Drink in of it as such fantasies would employ. Rare in each life, I think, a kindred soul draws near. Erecting friendship's link, dissipating tears. A single breath of light, she's likened to the sun. My days await her night in mem'ries just begun. Still naught is e'er perfect, for the world's full of pain. Of mem'ries and regret, of aching heart's refrain. Few hearken this as so, not her, she understands. Your life "goes as it goes," you live it as you can. Oh an' I could tell her, or that she'd only see- Undaunted, now I'm sure, I want her life with me. < !signature--> Infinite dreams I can't deny them Infinity is hard to comprehend. I couldn't hear those screams Even in my wildest dreams. -Iron Maiden [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 07-06-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Not only a good acrostic...also a very excellent poem. Very nicely done, sir Christopher. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
From the first word to the last and to all the words down the side, I loved it.  |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I'm particularly fond of this one!  Get a big 'ol bunches of lots from me. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Took my breath away this one Lovely writing here Christopher Coco |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Hey Chris, I so much enjoyed reading this again! "Rare in each life, I think, a kindred soul draws near." Soul mates, something I long for, wondering if I actually have one or not! "Oh an' I could tell her, or that she'd only see- Undaunted, now I'm sure, I want her life with me." Again, beautiful words here, music to me ears! Very touching Chris! < !signature--> ~Sheri [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 07-06-2000).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hmmmm nice work here - not for the book though C? K |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
um, christopher? ^voting box?^ (how can we love you if you won't let us?) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Christopher~ Why won't you mark the box so I can vote for this?! this is really beautiful and even better knowing it's an acrostic! Put in for the book will ya? -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
 Oops! I forget that you have to re-check the box if you do a preview! Fixed now, thank you for writing me! And thank you for the comments!!! Chris |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
There now. I feel better, don't you? |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The Acrostic King strikes again..  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
perfect... EXCEPTIONAL JM What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Beautiful acrostic here Chris, I don't know how you manage to turn out quality pieces one after another.. Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Christopher~ Your words bring such loving thoughts to the minds of many. This line alone is worth the read - 'Rare in each life, I think, a kindred soul draws near.' Enjoyed this gift and I thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
You are indeed the acrostic-meister ... you know I love this one ... --Me< !signature--> YOUR LIFE IS A TEST It is only a test ... If this were your Actual Life, you would have been given better instructions! [This message has been edited by Skyfyre (edited 07-08-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Christopher! Your sentiments flowed so sweetly and with such incredible beauty! Truly well done! (click) Best wishes, /Kit |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Lovely poem, I loved the acrostic (said in a jealous tone) you done good Chris m'dear!  ~Heather |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Chris this was excellent! And to top it off an acrostic!  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is more than poetry, Christopher, it's a tapestry! Kathleen |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Allow me to thank you all for your comments! Love y'all! Chris |
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