Voices on the Web |
Vapors |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vapors Coffee vapors sweep the floor, Flow within my bedroom door, Seek me out like infrared, Gently rousing me from bed. Luring me away from sleep, Rousing me of restful keep, The promise of my mornings mix That ever potent mornings fix. Morphine raptures from a cup, Lavish tasting that I sup, Gently ups the waking dead, Clearing cobwebs from my head. Subtle brown this liquids brew, Bringing more than change to view, Soothes me like a newlywed, Promising good things ahead. It is the crown of my surcease, This pot of brown that fixes peace. |
||
© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved | |||
Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
How wonderfully light hearted, Sy! Voting, voting... K |
||
Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Mmm.. makes coffee sound delicious.. bleh, what am I thinking.. i HATE coffee.. lol.. well done.. a great piece of poetry.. *vote vote* Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
||
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Java.. *V.. |
||
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Yes ! We share this love. I think I'll have a cup to Waltz me through the poetry sup Within the brew of you Toasting the best ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very perky, Sy |
||
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
All the above, love you all, big thanks. |
||
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
{~,^} Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
||
X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
oh I love Love LOVE this poem!!! ~H |
||
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thanks for the vote what does {~,^} mean? X Angel, Thanks for the love. |
||
bad little dog Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 38city pound |
I love coffee ... but all they give me is water and dry Purina ... and it's the light mix ... makes me wanna eat grass voted heh can yuh spare a cup Ruff Bow Wow Grrrrrrrrrrr |
||
Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Boy do I understand the phiene for caffeine! (Mtn. Dew for me please!) LOL |
||
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
What a wonderful piece of work, Seymour... regards, sudhir |
||
dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
need it! want it! gotta have it!! heehee (you know, they say an apple works better than coffee in the morn...?? go figure..) this little poem is the best part of waking up...ok..that was stupid...LOL dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
||
Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Very enjoyable light poem. Needed that today. Thanks, Pete |
||
Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Good Morning, Seymour... Loved this! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
||
AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
wonderful work very well written enjoyed reading it very much! If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
||
jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Did you study about coffee, sy? I can smell it here in New Zealand - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
||
juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Mmm mmm, got my taste buds flowin for a cup of java. Very well done. Juls |
||
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all the wonderful people I did not thank I do so now. Luck to you all. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |