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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois ![]() |
I long for awesome sunsets Someone to share them with, Romantic walks along the beach A passionate, tender kiss. I long for summer nights To lay beneath the moon, Make love under twinklin' stars Or in the park at noon. I long for summer dances In a field filled high with wheat, Or the coldness of a stream Where we could hang our feet. Romantic dinners by candlelight A loving word from you, A warm and steamy bath With bubbles filled for two. [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 07-04-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful Becky!! You've got my vote, now if you could just supply that guy for me, I'd be happy! ![]() |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Nice! ![]() The only suggestion I might have is to add an apostrophe onto "twinklin!" KnowwhatImean? |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Careful ... you don't get trampled in the rush wow ![]() |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Beautiful. Very nic. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WhtDove~ you deserve all the things you long for........ I hope you get them all! *****VOTE***** ![]() Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful hon ![]() ![]() Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Rebecca - How beautiful is this????? What a perfect longing. Bonnie |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sharon I wish I could! But, hey ask Nan if she's done with Troy yet ![]() Thank you Chris for letting me know that! I appreciate that much! LOL Rex, a rush? I'll certainly try ![]() Thanks Jamie! Thanks Sea! I've dreamed, maybe someday. But thankfulness for what I have now ![]() Thank you DA! ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
you deserve to get all that you long for, and more...this is sweet... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you and me and all of Passions make 3... ![]() beautiful and tender Dovey.. lovely wishes of the heart from your poets pen wonderful sentiments take care, jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dearest Beck; i love this poem and it gets my vote for the book! I ditto above and say that you deserve all this and more. This is such a beautifully written poem. Love, ellie |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
dovey, this is by far the best construction in any poem I've seen you write. It is so smooth and natural it is a pleasure to vote for this one..... ![]() |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Bonnie you slipped in there on me earlier. Thank you ![]() Serenity that's sweet, and I thank you! Janet it's probably the only one I've written of it's kind. I would love to write more these ![]() Thank you dear Ellie! I have what I need though ![]() Balladeer that's the ultimate compliment coming from you. I loved writing this one, had visions in my head, and it flowed out. Someday maybe I'll get the unction to do another. I'd have to say I had the most fun with this one, out everything I've written ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteDove~ A lovely poem - full of lovely thoughts. Quite an enjoyable read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
What a wonderful longing whitedove. A most enjoyable read ![]() Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Great longing Dove. Makes me want to offer myself but of course my wife would never allow such a thing ![]() Thanks, Pete |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I remember this one! Very beautiful, Rebecca! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you all for such wonderful compliments! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*whew* don't we all! hubba hubba! ![]() ~Heather |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sounds like heaven to me... ![]() |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL Heather, hubba hubba! Nan, sounds like heaven to me too ![]() |
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bad little dog Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 38city pound |
wow ... maybe you could take me for a walk in the park ![]() Ruff Bow Wow Grrrrrrrrrrr |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Great things to be longing for! And great piece as well! I hope you get what you dream of! ![]() Much enjoyed by Irie! ~Sheri |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL you bad dog! ![]() Irie thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, I sure enjoyed writing it ![]() |
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