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linda munday
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315
Adelaide, Australia

0 posted 2000-07-03 11:16 PM

by Linda Munday

A solitary figure sat on a rock beneath the lunar glow
He sat there quietly remembering of a lover he did know
Who had given all her heart to him in a gentle ebbing flow
Of care and trust and love and unconditionally so.

He felt her love with every wave that he watched come up the beach
He felt her care like grains of sand into each pore they reach
He felt her trust and empathy floating on the breezy air
He felt her kisses on his lips, although she wasn't there.

He touched his chest and fondly remembered that sweet night
When all alone on their special rock, he held her oh so tight
And felt her love and felt her pain and took it to himself
As tide rolled in they'd made their love on that their rocky shelf.

© Copyright 2000 Linda Munday - All Rights Reserved
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
1 posted 2000-07-04 12:47 PM

very nice and thoughtful piece...


Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Poe Ay
New Member
since 2000-06-30
Posts 9

2 posted 2000-07-04 03:54 AM

Fantastic imagery.  I could feel the emotion, but yet it left me wondering why?
Poe Ay.

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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

3 posted 2000-07-04 06:57 PM

Nicely written.  Enjoyed your poem.
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
4 posted 2000-07-05 08:09 AM

well written, lovely flow and the most delightful images  
Loved this piece

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

5 posted 2000-07-05 12:28 PM

excellent..the imagery, the rhyme and most of all the lovefilled tender emotions

What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

Poe Ay
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since 2000-06-30
Posts 9

6 posted 2000-07-06 03:03 AM

Prom... ty or do i call you jamie?

Poe Ay... it was supposed to.

Mike.. love your stuff.

Tracie... ty very much.. made me feel good.

Janet... emotions.. sometimes they are just too powerful for our own

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