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Words of Music (The Piano) |
linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
About the deepest love one can feel WORDS OF MUSIC (The Piano) Floating on an endless sea, liquid notes of purity Sterling melody played on heart, inhaled by soul to deepest part Flats and sharps melodious wed, wistful score weaves silver thread Through silk and satin tapestry, unrivalled in it's clarity Piano plays it's prayers in notes; wafting, rising, gently floats Immersed, the soothing tones take hold; devine angelic wings enfold Carried to the heights of space, your words will hold a special place Musical love made to my heart, and held by me till death we part. [This message has been edited by linda munday (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Absolutely sterling here---abounding with moon glow...But I must insist that you give us a voter's box....this is too good to pass up...linda...e me...I'll do what I can to help...Fabulous! |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Serenity, thanks an awful lot for your support. I am sooo confused... how do I make my poems available for voting.... Please tell me someone... please, pretty please! I am sure it's easy when you know how. And while on the subject how do I vote for the others poems? Am I a total pc reject or is everything like flagging poetry so obscure? And while I got you all here, how do I edit something...eg the poem's title. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is lovely!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully written Linda! This flowed so sweetly ... almost melodic itself, well done! (glad you got the book/votey thing worked out for us)! Best wishes, /Kit |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
check flag vote repeat with linda i just cant compete! yuh yuh yuh |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
wow Linda, I am so happy you are a part of Passions now. You are an incredibly gifted poet. This poem was spectacular! If you need any help as to the who's, hows, or whys...email me angel@eclecticthings.net ~Heather |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Very nice job Linda. Good subject, good rhymes and nice flow. I like. Pete |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A syllabilic symphony gets my vote |
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Elyse Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 414Apex (think raleigh) NC |
very pretty, i feel that way about music too luv Elyse |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
I like! Your words gave me a deep feeling of peace. Very nice. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well done... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Thank you all for your wonderful encouragment. It is an inspiration in itself. Now my mind is permanently filled with poetic words..looking to be born. No one told me poetry could be addictive, there should be some warning about that.lol What a wonderful forum. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
What a beautifully melodic poem. You have my support and my vote Rich |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful poem! I love the piano, so I was just drawn to this one. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
poetic perfection from your poets pen excellent work jm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely divine! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Enjoyed muchly. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Linda, Whatever problems you have with the computer, you certainly don't have when writing. This read like a burst of song, measured in beats, cadences, breath, notes. That part about making musical love to the heart -- I understood completely. Awesome, awesome poem. Mike |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
And I thought it was just me that felt that way.....lol... Thank you, all of you for your wonderful comments on this poem.. they mean a lot. Linda M. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
The poem is lovely... i'd love to hear the music... what was the song you were listening to? Very nice writing. |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Now if I told you the piece of music, would that spoil it.... oh well here goes... its by Enya, Watermark Album, song called Watermark. |
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Poe Ay New Member
since 2000-06-30
Posts 9 |
Looks like a masterpiece to me... great stuff.... had to say something again. |
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