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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Voices of the Web Voices of the web are singing silent lullabies Words unheard by any ear, sung only to the eyes Messages and songs of life exuding voicelessly From wondrous music for the mind in lines of poetry They fill our eyes with pleasure words, our minds with thoughts untold As visions of a dream of love, or truth of life unfold And every word cast to the eye is like a melody That fills the heart with joy, or makes a tear stream endlessly And who are voices of the web? They are the ones with dreams They write what’s truly in their hearts or merely what it seems They scroll the words that represent an essence without shame Then stamp each verse with signature they call a poet name No matter what the verse has sung, or what the voice conveys A certain ambiguity is heard in many ways For poetry’s an illusion that makes us want for more And begs the eyes discover meaning deep within the core It fills the mind with images of what it wants to see It comes from someone’s heart but seems a part of you and me But the secret of the voice is how the words are somehow strung Into powdery phrases so alluring that they should be sung Elusive thought, elusive dreams, the tides of flow and ebb Scrolled into magic poetry by voices of the web Elizabeth Santos |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Your mind is like a flower that blooms and blooms and blooms. Love Sy |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Of course this belongs here...where else? Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Perfect for the book, Liz--you have a vote here! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
...and another!  Denise |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
and one more... Liz, this deserves to be a part of the book for sure... regards, Sudhir |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Another good one, another vote... We're going to need three times the space we've got, don't ya think? |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I agree totally with everyone here...a wonderful poem!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, dear friend~ Such a lovely, lovely poem. Your heart is open to us all ... Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
vote vote vote vote vote vote!!! Aah, bum.. u can only vote once.. *_^ brilliant, Elizabeth.. Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
If this doesn't make it to the first page of the book, then something has gone tragically wrong. It's so perfect as an introduction poem..... PLEASE EVERYONE AFTER ME............... VOTE VOTE VOTE....... VOTE VOTE VOTE....... Linda M. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
there couldnt be a book without this one... yes..the opening dedication jm |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Very nice writing! dh A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
{~,^} Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Applauding! Ya know you're right up there next to Balladeer in your poetry! This was most excellent! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Well done dear Liz...Beautiful Love Tracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Little help back to the top!!  |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
yep..i think this would be a wonderful introductory poem for the book! great job! dg "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Simply perfect Elizabeth! This is a treasure indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"Elusive thought, elusive dreams, the tides of flow and ebb Scrolled into magic poetry by voices of the web" Liz, this is superb! I hope this gets on the cover! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
beautifully written. add a vote. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Only now am I getting caught up with a little reading and have found these wonderful responses to this poem. I thank you all for your very kind comments Liz |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
{~,^} Ron's going to have such a hard time...the book is going to be SO big! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like this very much Elizabeth. Some of the wonderful lines you put together make me smile with pleasure and that's the reason I return to read the fine works of the poets at Passions. "For poetry's an illusion that makes us want for more and begs the eyes discover meaning deep within the core." I smiled. "Into powdery phrases so alluring that they should be sung." I smiled. Elusive thoughts, elusive dreams, the tides of flow and ebb scrolled into magic poetry by voices on the web." and I smiled and I smiled and I had good time......ethome.. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sunshine, Thanks, dear for your comments Ethome, Your remarks are always very generous and warmly felt. Thanks so much for reading and taking the time for your very kind comments Liz |
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