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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Love Will Come Sequestered spirits sway Sleepless nights, days Ferries follow streams To crystalline dreams Starry eyes ablaze Waiting our lives long The heart’s divine song Intoning desires With all that inspires Love will come along Travelling nighttime skies Turning planets at sunrise Wishing-wells filled with coins Shattered heart rejoins Hopelessness fades, dies Ascension, finally flying Feather, weight defying It was always within reach Holding sand on the beach Love for us undying And in HIS repeating song Sung to us all along Love will come along © 1999 Corinne Bailey |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
excellent C,... such perfect imagery... tender gentle emotions very enjoyable read...calming and soothing take care, jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
very nicely done. I have always liked that rhyme scheme and the poem is a wonderful expression. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Very good Corinne, now all we need do. . . is listen. . . Wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I love this, Corinne!! How beautiful your images are! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, You got my vote on this one. *L* |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I love the imagery in this poem, and I also love the message. You have my vote!  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you kindly, Janet Marie, Mike, Sven, ESP, Seymour and Lovebug! Corinne |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful Corinne, and it will... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I remember this one Corinne, one of my favorites...back to top with a vote on the side... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Another back to the top with a *vote*... this one is so good... regards, sudhir |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Thats my belief too. I really liked this one. Of course I'd vote on your smile...  Parker |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very nice. LILT, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Just lovely ! The poem AND your smile ... I'm voting with Parker ! ! LOL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wonderful imagery, beautifully written poem. Bonnie |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is right up there with the rest of your best, my friend... I sure hope it's true..  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'm sure love will come along. This is so nicely done with poignancy. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
And your poem! Voted |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
very dreamy love it |
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