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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Candelabra Where once brigades of light did light, The darkest times of darkest night, Teardrop candles, remain abreast, In dust, the candelabra rest. Where light and music made a ball And phantoms danced upon the wall, And where whispers behind a fan, Gave mention of a courtesan. Where dreams gave birth to fantasy, Desires to sensibility, A world of boldness, care and dare, A time of time beyond compare. In dust, the candelabras rest, Each teardropped candle, cold abreast. Time's once sweet morrow, dried e'er more: I rise in sorrow, close the door. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A delightful read. Thank You. Jamie |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
I really like this poem ST, it has a wonderful flow too - well done "voted" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah Seymore...how could I forget this one? It inspired a poem from me as I recall: The Forgotten Candelabra Wherein the candelabra rests Once bright, now marred by rust The door shut tight, the room sealed up Left to gather dust The candles long have been put out The dreams have faded too Where once we danced are memories Left of me and you The ghosts of us, they haunt the room Where time and space reside And though I stand outside the door My heart was left inside Simply lovely, my friend and one of my favorites of all times of yours To love means never to be afraid of the windstorms of life: should you shield the canyons from the windstorms you would never see the true beauty of their carvings. ~Elizabeth Kubler-Ross |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ I haven't read this before but having read it now it put great images in my mind. Excellent! *****VOTE***** -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a great read... Some nice technique here, Sy... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, the last stanza alone is worth the price of admission. Voting here.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Prometheus, Moonshine, Hoot, Sea, Nan, and balladeer. I thank you one and all. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
How well I remember this One more vote Liz |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
absolutely perfect Sy-guy so very beautiful jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
One of my favorites of yours, Sy! I remember it well! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Softly - ever so softly you play music that makes my heart sing. Stirringly lovely, my friend. Love you ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Janet, Denise and Marge, I thank you much for the votes. *L* |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sy~ What a most delightful read...excellent imagery and i enjoyed this greatly Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I'm voting for you for president too Sy!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tracie, Big thanks for the vote. Poet deVine, Only if you'll be my vice. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Keep writing like this, Seymore, and you're going to become one of my faves. Mike |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Seymour, Im glad I did not miss this beauty, so much loved. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
bsquirrel and cerenity, thank you both so much for the votes. |
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