Disolving Into The Core.......

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Disolving Into The Core.......

Moonshine
Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

0 posted 2000-06-28 01:35 AM

Alone in the darkness of her garden
she wilts,
Her once vibrant light
shines no more,
The sweet colours of her petals
bleed slowly from her,
The last shimmer of life
dully ebbs to the cold floor,
And with wounds left unhealed by
the breadth of endless time,
Her frail, broken body finally
crumbles beneath her,
Falling rapidly through the abyss of
slow beating pain,
To the rotting undergrowth where
strong roots of hope once were,
And like a loving mother calling
her sweet child to come home,
The dank, wet earth wraps itself
around her dying soul,
She takes comfort in the cold
and dark of nothingness,
Where nothing and noone
exist anymore.

[This message has been edited by Moonshine (edited 06-28-2000).]

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 2000-06-28 02:46 AM

Hello Moonshine...

This is beautiful - it floats...

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2000-06-28 03:24 AM

Wow J, I remember this one! very beautiful indeed!

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died,
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"

Moonshine
Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

3 posted 2000-06-29 12:59 PM

Hey there Severn,
Thanx for reading and for your lovely reply

Moonshine
Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

4 posted 2000-06-29 01:00 AM

Thanx for your lovely reply and comment M

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2000-06-29 06:45 AM

remember this one
Lovely with an excellent flow

Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Moonshine
Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

6 posted 2000-06-29 09:36 PM

Thanx for your lovely reply and comment Tracie

I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

7 posted 2000-08-07 07:24 PM

Mmmm. You've got my vote. Such a sad yet beautiful poem.

Joy

Moonshine
Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

8 posted 2000-08-09 09:36 AM

Thanx for taking the time to read my poem and reply Joy. I am glad that you enjoyed my poem and also - thanx for the vote too

Moonshine.

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