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This Slivered Moon |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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This Slivered Moon I could see the slivered moon in the western sky resplendent and in the shadow thus displayed reverence spoke as purple iris knelt together petals folded and behind them in the bower sunflowers bowed like dolls with yellow hair tired from sunlight’s hold on watching. And then the magic evening breezes touched the sage and released such magic frog voices spilled from off the mountains across the canyon’s echoed chamber and stillness folded in my vision and brought me too complete delighting quenched the hunger of my spirit touched my moonlit face beguiling. Oh slivered moon with shadowed light dream me perfect in your drenching breeze this spirit with this loving touch of magic moving heaven beguile my skin to soft with light engorge my sleep with fragrant dream keep me in your quiet watch as day succumbs to nighttime’s peace. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My friend, my friend~ Thank you for this !  I love you to pieces ! It is such a lovely piece and worthy of placement in the book. Beautiful, Martie~ Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Martie my friend, I can see you out there, arms wrapped around yourself, your face to the slivered moon, yes, I can see you out there... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Martie, Martie, Martie, you once again have left me speechless I remember this one, and yet again I have to catch my breath. Beautiful! beautiful! I can hear your voice speaking these words, I have not heard your voice but in my mind I hear you.You have my vote Dear One! Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Just wonderful you have my vote on this one. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Remember this slice of heaven well... what an absolutely splendid work of art... your metaphors and imagery are beyond compare... btw... I like this one...( a lot) |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
All of my comments from the first post still stand....it is still a brilliant poem |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the moon pales in comparison to the glow of this beauty  my goodness you just so good at this... why if your not careful ... someone might think you are a poet... and there would go your reputation *smile* perfect slice of the moon, martie gator. jm |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--For you, my friend! Sunshine--I do believe you can! Dark Angel--thank you for such a lovely comment! You are the dear one! Mike--You make me blush...and smile...thanks Balladeer--went back to look, your first comments were sublime! jm--you are so cute...never did worry too much about my reputation |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You are the master/mistress of imagery! I do so enjoy this.  |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I always get lost in your beautiful words, Martie! Just lovely! Denise |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I can only echo what the others have said! ~Beautiful writing~ You belong in Chapter 1. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Martie, I would vote for you for president... breathtaking in your signature style...love it. |
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Geoffrey Sonnen Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142Reading, PA USA |
Martie, this made me feel peaceful. It took me to a place where I wish I could stay. It's absolutely Beautiful. You have such a way with words. Thank you for your "Gift". You have my vote ! Peace, Geoff |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
vote* |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Slivered Moon... what a beautiful thought... and what a marvelous poem from you Martie... truly wonderful... had a most enjoyable read... regards, sudhir |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
PdV--Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem. Denise--I'll come find you, my friend. Danny--thank you for the echo...and your sweet comment. Serenity--If I were president, we would all be in trouble. Thanks for saying so though. Geoffrey--thank you for the vote...I'm glad this poem brought you peace. Jeffrey--thanks for the vote Sudhir--thank you so much...I'm glad that you enjoyed it. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such exquisite imagery Martie ... absolutely stunning! Thank you for taking me on this picturesque retreat! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You already know what I think...lol...I do not need to tell you yet again what your poetry does to me hon! dream me perfect in your drenching What a line... K |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kit--you can come along anytime...you are so appreciative. Kamla--Yes, of course you can tell me....I like it! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Oh slivered moon with shadowed light dream me perfect in your drenching breeze this spirit with this loving touch of magic moving heaven beguile my skin to soft with light engorge my sleep with fragrant dream keep me in your quiet watch as day succumbs to nighttime’s peace. Ohhhh my oh wonderous one...you just keep them coming don't you. A fan for sure and I believe I am up for president in your fan club as well. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I have'nt read anything so absolutely beautiful in a long time.....it's funny how some things hit you right between the eyes and on into the mind....this is one.. Martie of course you have my vote there's no question. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very wonderful  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Martie, this is a beautiful vision, and my heart just flows with it. Lovely. Catalinamoon |
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