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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Water hole My Spirited horse got up and ran until the dawn of the linking day. He crossed streams of flowing ideas, he trod through forests of laughter. Before his journey came to a close he came to a water hole with reflection. Within your eyes every man sees pain, rise above the harbor and gallop in faith. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very nicely done, my girl. My votes in... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Liked muchly. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Gloria!  Denise |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Very wise words, and manages to tell its message with crisp language, not heavy-handedness. Enjoyed this much. Mike |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
liked it lots i did |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Yes, yes, yes! This gets my vote for sure. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"Within your eyes every man sees pain, rise above the harbor and gallop in faith." loved those lines, gloria... good one! voting... |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This poem M'Lady, is now on my fridge. I love it ! |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Beautifully written with great message. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
LD, You can count on my vote! Great writing! Dennis :^) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Lost Dreamer, Wonderful poetry here, a keeper, thank you so much. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
What can I say, but very nicely done... had a nice read... regards, sudhir |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is very lovely indeed Lost Dreamer ... galloping right into the book I think!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
good poem... well written |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wow LD - Love this.... Bonnie |
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