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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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blankly a dash replaces letters, words and spaces left unfilled unsaid same old stories nevertheless …….. board the express train of thought conveying ideas and meaning this page a surface blank of nothingness of naught I, an informant of nil I mark a pause, a stroke, a line a row of unwritten words Angel of Darkness June2000 Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Don't believe I've seen this one before DA. 'express train of thought'.....I like this one  |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
I like this one too. And I agree, "express train of thought" is a nice image. Pete |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Angel and Pete, thanks so much for your lovely replies. *hugs*Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Yep, "express train of thought" is a goody So's the poem... nice and thought provoking, I like!Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you so much Eric Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
i like you style as well as your formatting style... good poem... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Where did you hide this one? Very good!  |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Getting over a block by writing about it. Superb Maree. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lubberly lubberly stuff....  K |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
I liked this one. Has my vote, |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Been there, done that, got the t-shirt. You've nailed this one m'dear. To a "t." As much as I hate to use the word... perfect. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Great stuff well done, I enjoyed this very muchTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
perhaps my favourite so far .. the style Maree ... the style ..~sigh~ P |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done, Maree! Denise |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
I'm bumping this one back up because it stuck with me so much! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Glad you did, Chris. I missed this one. Voting here....very nice work, Angel |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ What a joy to read your work. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
I'm bumping this one back up because it stuck with me so much!  i'm serious MM .. it did! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you all, for you sweet, kind, and lovely replies and for taking the time for reading...Christopher and Poertree thanks for bumping it back up again Thank you.Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Geoffrey Sonnen Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142Reading, PA USA |
Hello Dark Angel (what a cool name),Doreen invited me to this incredible site and am just getting acquainted with everything.I remember reading your offerings at O.S.You have such a unique style and it seems I have to go back and reread what you contribute many times.You have a way of stirring thought and summoning analysis.That's what makes a good writer.Thanks for the read ! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Geoffrey, thank you so much for you lovely reply and compliment err My offerings at O.S ? I'm not quite sure what you mean here.Thank You and again Welcome to Passions Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Geoffrey Sonnen Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142Reading, PA USA |
Maybe I'm mistaken. I'm sorry if I am. I thought that I had seen your moniker at "Open Scroll". Could there be two Dark Angels ? I certainly think not. There seems to be only one, judging by the quality and uniqueness that you exhibit in your incredible writing. Sorry if I goofed ! Peace to you, Geoff |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Geoffrey, Yes you have mistaken me with someone else and yes I think there may be a few Dark Angels about I have not even heard of Open Scroll no problem about the goof up It happens! Well nice to hear from you again. Peace back Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Okay so I'm a little slow...but I'm voting...great poem! |
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Geoffrey Sonnen Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142Reading, PA USA |
This message has been edited. An email has been sent to the member regarding this. Thank you. Geoffrey, if you have not received our emails, please contact one of us immediately! Our concern is for you safety. Thank you. Sharon [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 07-10-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Geaoffrey, please talk to me , I need to talk to you, You have no email addres swhere I can write you and continue this, please could you write me, I need to discuss something you and I have in common pleaseeeeeeee. TRUST ME ON THIS! write me please Geoffrey. Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Geoffrey I'm a bit concerned sweetheart at your post....if you have ICQ please message me on 10184180 or email me at: rainbowsarespecial@yahoo.com or cindy16857@aol.com No matter how bad life can get and i know it can get really bad, it is better to work things out, to talk and to see the sun rise once more... I hope I read you wrong but I'm hear anyway... Big hugs sweetheart |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Geoffrey I sure do hope you are reading this now....I pray that you are, I am listening to you, I wil listen to you, but you need to tell me more... I can relate to your situation with your love....beleive me I can, i truly can and it is so weird that you have chosen me to tel lme this because it is as if you know that I was there too... please write me Geoffrey I need to talk to you!!! I am praying that you see this and asnwer me Maree |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Geoffrey, we are both still here at voices, so why don't we get together and chat ok I know you are still here, so lets talk, casue I think you need to know what I have to say ok I'm here for you !! ok my friendwaiting for your reply |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Geoffrey?? I REALLY NEED TO DISCUSS SOMETHING WITH YOU. PLEASE WILL YOU TAKE THE TIME TO LISTEN, I FEEL THAT I NEED TO SHARE IT WITH YOU. BELEIVE IT OR NOT WE DO HAVE WHAT I WANT TO DISCUSS IN COMMON. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Geoffrey, this is my ICQ # 34222819 and my email is darkangel_66@hotmail.com please talk to me, it is always the best thing to do, to talk. I am very concerned here and I am here all ears and broad shoulders |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this totally blew me away dark maree |
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