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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
My Computer You frustrating beast and my companion, too I hate you and love you and wonder at you you byte me, make me crawl through windows keep me up all night leave me in limbo You give me gifts of which, I'm unaware Cookies without milk and boots in pairs You taunt me, tantalize me And, snicker, too I know you do I have been watching you All day, all night you tease me, please me drive me crazy You stare at me and laugh at me making me glare and pull out my hair I explore you, adore you My computer, my foe and friend leading me to dead ends you laugh at me I know you do I have been watching you Oh, God! I think I'm in love Teresa King [This message has been edited by netswan (edited 06-18-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
LOL...I know what you mean!!! Mmmm...my computer or my car? What the heck, I'll take the bus to work!! |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Thanks for the laugh!  This poem is just fantastic! Thoroughly enjoyed reading it - and re-reading, and re-reading! |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Ah, this was good for a laugh! Loved your play on words... Computers certainly have love hate love relationships |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i think the book needs a few good computer poems i mean come on "voices on the web" uh this be a good one for sure |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lol....this is great! Ya certainly got my vote! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
lol...that's twice this morning you've done that to me....lol you've got mine. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
ROFL I love it The puns really make this.Nice job Teresa! Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
hehehe this was a good'un |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Loved this Netswan! Can relate to this just a little "too" well ... wonderful poem!!!! Best wishes, /Kit |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Netswan~ this is too funny! I go through that everytime I get on here, I beg,I plead, I curse, and I thank it!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
CREATIVE AND CLEVER and cute too  perfect for a book inspired by the web great choice swan |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very creative work, netswan, we need a few punny (oops I did it again!!! twice sorry ) poems around to keep us in our happy jolly moods...regards, sudhir |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
This would make a strong addition to the book. Brad |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
This would make a strong addition to the book. Brad PS sorry for the double. I didn't vote the first time around. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I'm still laughing with this one Teresa Got my vote for sure All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks for the smile. As with most things that make us smile, this had tons of truth in it (maybe an uncomfortable amount ). Thanks, netswan.Mike |
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Elyse Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 414Apex (think raleigh) NC |
cute one! luv Elyse |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
just needed to send this one back up for one more round.... Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Very appropriate, cute poem |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
This is a great big thank you to all of you for your comments and votes. I am recycling in case some of you have missed voting hehe. But, mostly - in appreciation to you all. I am sure this book will just be filled with gorgeous poems. I wish that Troy Hoecherl would have submitted one. If any of you can encourage him, it would be great! ~netswan |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
LOLOL!!!! Wonderful and true!! ~Kelly ~Kellsue Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill |
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