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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~*LOVE'S GLOW*~ Daylight fades as shadows dance, lover's entwined in an erotic trance, embracing with delight, seeking pleasures from each other, seeking rapture and romance at candlelight, the walls, awakened, absorb the heat of passion, fires burn inside and out, in sultry bliss, two souls meet as one, a flame that burns eternally, with candles blaze, dancing in sweet ecstasy of love glowing By Melissa P. Monette aka- Melissa Honeybee [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-25-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Melissa, a beautiful glowing poem. wonderful. "An abyss that lasted creation A circus complete with all fools Foundations that lasted the ages Then ripped apart at their roots" joy division |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Fires burning inside and out....Melissa, this is very smooth and well done |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lovely Melissa, well done Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
Ms Honeybee, what can I say, well done! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"the walls, awakened, absorb the heat of passion," Wonderful line above to compliment an equally beautiful poem Melissa! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Lovely, well done. Thanks. Pete |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you so much everyone, it means a lot! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ooohhh spicy is so nicey LOL VERY nice sensual and soft loved it jm |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
mmmm I like ! ~H |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've got the candles ready Melissa. . . This is just wonderful. . . very soft and subtle. . . beautiful. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Janet Marie, X Angel and Sven, a big Thanks! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Melissa, This painted a wonderful picture of loves glow, enjoyed much. Cerenity |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you Cerenity! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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