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Honeybee
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0 posted 2000-06-25 04:18 PM




~*LOVE'S GLOW*~


Daylight fades
as shadows dance,
lover's entwined
in an erotic trance,
embracing with delight,
seeking pleasures from each other,
seeking rapture and romance
at candlelight,
the walls, awakened, absorb the heat of passion,
fires burn inside and out,
in sultry bliss,
two souls meet as one,
a flame that burns eternally,
with candles blaze,
dancing in sweet ecstasy
of love glowing

By Melissa P. Monette
aka- Melissa Honeybee




[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-25-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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ireland
1 posted 2000-06-25 05:46 PM


Melissa, a beautiful glowing poem. wonderful.

"An abyss that lasted creation A circus complete with all fools
Foundations that lasted the ages Then ripped apart at their roots"
joy division

Balladeer
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2 posted 2000-06-25 10:12 PM


Fires burning inside and out....Melissa, this is very smooth and well done  
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

3 posted 2000-06-26 01:53 AM


Lovely Melissa, well done  

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died,
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"


Christopher J
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4 posted 2000-06-26 06:01 AM


Ms Honeybee, what can I say, well done!
Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2000-06-26 06:27 AM


"the walls, awakened, absorb the heat of passion,"

Wonderful line above to compliment an equally beautiful poem Melissa!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Not A Poet
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6 posted 2000-06-26 12:48 PM


Lovely, well done. Thanks.

Pete

Honeybee
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7 posted 2000-06-26 03:13 PM



Thank you so much everyone, it means a lot!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

Janet Marie
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8 posted 2000-06-26 05:47 PM


ooohhh spicy is so nicey LOL  
VERY nice
sensual and soft
loved it
jm

X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
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9 posted 2000-06-27 03:44 PM


mmmm I like !

~H

Sven
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10 posted 2000-06-28 01:08 AM


I've got the candles ready Melissa. . .

This is just wonderful. . . very soft and subtle. . . beautiful. . .

--------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



Honeybee
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11 posted 2000-06-28 02:31 PM



Janet Marie, X Angel and Sven, a big Thanks!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

Cerenity
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12 posted 2000-07-03 04:10 PM


Hi Melissa,

This painted a wonderful picture of loves glow, enjoyed much.

Cerenity

Honeybee
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13 posted 2000-07-03 08:32 PM



Thank you Cerenity!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly

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