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of roses you gave me...

jennie may*
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 122

0 posted 2000-06-25 01:25 AM

lalalala

I sing and sing and
sing
to

stop the sting

words I wish you could
feel
leaving my lips

breath from my lungs
like
thorny tips

of roses you gave me

all dried up in my closet

Christopher J
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 94

1 posted 2000-06-25 02:10 AM

I can relate to this poem..i have a friend with a dried rose on her wall from a friend...great poem!

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

2 posted 2000-06-25 08:05 AM

Jennie, really enjoyed the poem. lovely

"An abyss that lasted creation A circus complete with all fools
Foundations that lasted the ages Then ripped apart at their roots"
joy division

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

3 posted 2000-06-25 12:08 PM

Jennie this is cool how you did this one!! I enjoyed it!! Thank You!!
Bridgette

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"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 06-26-2000).]

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

4 posted 2000-06-26 09:12 PM

Nicely written. Enjoyed.

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

5 posted 2000-08-07 07:14 PM

"all dried up in my closet"
Oh yes. I like the style you used here and loved how you wrapped it up.

Joy

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